im not livin my life, im surviving it
cant be sure if im alive in it
i strive to thrive in it
but i feel ive been deprived of it
im not so sly, that id be hidin it
but i feel like im ridin b*t*h
and i feel as if, my lifes been missed
im tired of this, life thats childish
i walk around smilin
while i play the worlds smallest violin
yet im stylin, so dial in
before you file in
and only then, let me know what kinda guy i am
or how your man, won't don't can't
make you moan and pant
under the light of a real dim lamp
our first night at summer camp
thats the first time you called me that
when you called me your teddy bear
i was ready there, to have our wedding there
but out you walked with messy hair
thats when they knew we had sex in there
i could tell, by their perplexing stare
and NO right answer questionaire
cause they could less than care
about two teens that were less than scared
with our bodies we did share
true love, i miss that braided hair
now we are just a jaded pair
the price i paid that day was fair
cause girl, your grade is rare
uncirculated, no faded glare
and baby girl i can breathe your air
what exactly have we created here
can't believe we made it here
can't believe we traded beer
for a drug thats nowhere near
the flavor we savored for over a year
let me know if its clear
it was what it was, so dry that tear
wipe that smear, snipe that sneer, and un-hype that jeer
why appear, that you my dear
could die of fear?
when in fact, your brave with pride intact

an interesting style you have carried through your thoughts. Has a bit of a jive to it.

This one is sweet i really like it.