sponsored links

Community > Poems & Creative Writing

Topic: She
AlphaRebel Joined Thu 11/12/09 Posts: 246	Thu 10/28/10 05:01 PM
I know where she is....on somewhere's mist, she stays an ever changing mystery. Her presence lingers, teasing my attention as she leaves ...elusive like her smile. My desire, her kiss...unrestrained togetherness. Her touch, my skin.....uninhibited tenderness. She and I, and I am quiet...peace to a raging sea. Dreams in her heart, she believes in my soul passion breathes.

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Thu 10/28/10 07:31 PM
Like..

AlphaRebel Joined Thu 11/12/09 Posts: 246	Thu 10/28/10 07:33 PM
Thanks

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Thu 10/28/10 08:01 PM
very nice, welcome to the creative writes forum

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Thu 10/28/10 08:09 PM
Easily this captures a woman's senses, creating a desire to be, she.

AlphaRebel Joined Thu 11/12/09 Posts: 246	Thu 10/28/10 08:09 PM
Thanks, Darlin.

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Sat 10/30/10 11:53 AM
nice entrance to the sandbox ... welcome

CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Sat 10/30/10 12:24 PM
Nice write. p.s.Your post was pulled sadly however we are in total agreement in regards to p-c & the subject in general.Godspeed!Cy 101st Airborne(vet)

AlphaRebel Joined Thu 11/12/09 Posts: 246	Sat 10/30/10 12:35 PM
Nice write. p.s.Your post was pulled sadly however we are in total agreement in regards to p-c & the subject in general.Godspeed!Cy 101st Airborne(vet) Yep, seems like controversy is a common theme in my world. Just never been good at apathy. My middle name is politically incorrect. Nothing but respect for you.

Community > Poems & Creative Writing