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my ribs are broken
one of my fists is broken in a silky and stubbly haze the last of these few days appears like a slide-show right before me my lungs rot like deadwood oak pine needles soak up in me avant-garde obituaries sit on my wall and stare back at me in pastel prisons ink like kisses of inexcusable phone calls 3 am no more meaning significant chapters in a mediocre life carved out of oak smells like pine wood desire empties the bank account and smiles leeringly behind the counter answers are half-bred truths the sun breaks down too early this motor is tired and it's stellar in the desert but i'm nowhere close this letter doesn't have a destination |
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I liked reading your poem.
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enjoyed
welcome..... |
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cool, hope to see more from you! welcome!
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Hey i am finally reading some poets who write just a tad more "on the younger side"....................which I really enjoy reading......
I am a big fan of the younger poets and the more urban influenced poets Good luck to you sweetie!!! Would love to see more!!! |
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An effective choice of words, bravo!
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Welcome
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