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Topic: Behind My Eyelids
johnnyheartbeep Joined Mon 09/27/10 Posts: 33	Mon 09/27/10 01:59 PM
In my mind the darkness stills Breath comes softly, even, slow A galaxy of pinpoints shears into view O holy night, absolve me

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 09/27/10 06:23 PM
nicely done...welcome

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Mon 09/27/10 07:55 PM
What KCtriple03 said...and yes..Welcome..

RainbowTrout Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 13869	Tue 09/28/10 05:17 AM
Hey. That is alright.

johnnyheartbeep Joined Mon 09/27/10 Posts: 33	Tue 09/28/10 01:58 PM
Thanks guys. First post on the site - hopefully there'll be others. This came to me one night when I was in that halfway stage between sleeping and waking. I kept turning it over and playing with it in my half-asleep mind. Finally, it got so powerful, I had to get up and write it down. Glad you liked.

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