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Topic: Flavor of Tears
DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Wed 08/04/10 12:08 PM Edited by DeathsTreaty on Wed 08/04/10 12:14 PM
What do your tears taste of? When joy is too much for a simple smile, what do they taste of? When anger erupts from your core, what do they taste of? When your depths have reached the very bottom, what do they taste of? When you wake to the unfamiliar sense of being left alone, what do they taste of? When you stare at the mirror so bitter, what do they taste of? When you finally scream till your throat caves, what do they taste of? When you sit back and think, what do they taste of?

Italy0219 Joined Sun 12/02/07 Posts: 2523	Wed 08/04/10 12:19 PM
Right now, failure. and it sucks.

venusenvy Joined Sat 07/31/10 Posts: 2984	Wed 08/04/10 12:31 PM
Salt

RainbowTrout Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 13869	Wed 08/04/10 12:45 PM
Sodium chloride.

DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Wed 08/04/10 12:49 PM
I didnt really mean it litteraly ^^"

venusenvy Joined Sat 07/31/10 Posts: 2984	Wed 08/04/10 12:50 PM
I didnt really mean it litteraly ^^" Ahahahha I know just messin witcha

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Wed 08/04/10 12:53 PM
sickness sadness sheer lonelyness longing love satisfaction

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Wed 08/04/10 12:54 PM
good write DT

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 08/04/10 01:10 PM
like it too. teasingbrunette

DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Wed 08/04/10 01:44 PM
^^ Thanx for reading

venusenvy Joined Sat 07/31/10 Posts: 2984	Wed 08/04/10 02:06 PM
^^ Thanx for reading I made a pot of wicked hot chili last week, it made my eyes water and my tears taste spicy

RowBaby Joined Fri 01/22/10 Posts: 11819	Wed 08/04/10 02:08 PM
Great write DT. I really like it.

DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Wed 08/04/10 02:12 PM
Thanx Row ^^ Spicy tears....kind of sounds like a new poem....

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