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Rain Wishes
Sitting in the cold thinking, I guess of rain wishes. It depresses me to feel the drops ravage my soul; I cry a little and hope for another day Time passes and I’m still here sitting in the cold; feeling chills come and go like the wind I want to fly with. I hate shivering. I hate it. Nothing to keep me dry nothing to keep me warm other than thoughts of you. I feel so depressed; I close my eyes and hope for another day. The cold rain, synchronized with the rhythm of my hearts’ beat, plays the blues. I don’t want to think anymore. I just want to see the sun shining as bright as love again; to feel it embrace my eyes while they’re closed. I want to feel its radiant heat; I want remember the burning passion that lover’s share. I want to feel it wash over me. I hate shivering. I hate it. I hate these rain wishes. They leave me so depressed. I want the day to end, I hope it does; and soon. I need another day. |
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good write
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I like the comparison between your lover`s warmth & the sun
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thanks.
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Hey Mig,,,man,,PLEASE,,keep on being YOU,,keep on writing from that REAL HEART and fire you have inside that allows you to type-out works like this..I have followed many of your writes and you have that truth through living,,,power and strength to draw from,,,all embedded inside your soul,,,keep bring it to the surfice,,and it will soon,,over-power everyone who reads them....TRUE THAT!!!!
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