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Lately, it's a theme A song running through My mind on rewind Forms a simple statement "Is this as good as it gets?" Cause I might want A do over, since I'm underwhelmed To this point In this life The strife, the Everyday, same way Maze that causes A hazy, sluggish pace Slow motion action Never keeping step With the dialog Held with myself Dreaming in pin point Accuracy thinking This it it- bullseye The shot misfires Again and again The target clear But hard as I squint Never fully in sight I want to say Bite me, give me A meal that fills Satiates, dissipates This discontent My emotions Spent, sent and Repent I must For a life unjust I wish I could trust Just once what Stands before me Clearly a vision I refuse to see Opting instead For an unrealistic plan And in the end Barely hanging on By a thread |
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this is great
peace |
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love back at ya
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Love this!
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yes..so well understood.
I appreciate your ability to pinpoint. |
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Great write P....
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Ohhhh girl I feel ya on this one seems the six shooter is not working maybe we need to go for the rope and the duct tape instead.
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Absolutely captivating, pkd.
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Ohhhh girl I feel ya on this one seems the six shooter is not working maybe we need to go for the rope and the duct tape instead.
yeh..what she said |
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Awesome write A+++
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Jimmy- peace to you
thanks kc
Gossipmpm-thanks
Sharris-thanks darling, you always have such great adds MzEm-thanks-hope classes are going well
plastic- captivating...I like that word
RawB- Thanks for the great grade!!! |
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Ohhhh girl I feel ya on this one seems the six shooter is not working maybe we need to go for the rope and the duct tape instead.
rope, duct tape...maybe dull the senses with a few margaritas and the shooting will improve
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(((hugs))) and duct tape!
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Feeling bent, slightly spent, in the need of a splint.
Troubled, all my thinking doubled, reconfirming I am puzzled. Very nice Pam, and life has me in your state of mind.
Through your words and open heart, Truly you are. One-of-a-kind.....
If EVER that thread pulls apart,,,, You can always fall into this man's heart. hugs...
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thanks Ms Teddy
duct tape can hold all kinds of things together
T-sorry you're in my state of mind. Snapping my fingers to get you out. Luckily, my moods never last very long.
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I really love this, the words come together so well. I feel that way alot.
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I really love this, the words come together so well. I feel that way alot.
Thank you kindly Calleigh
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it!
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hugs...