Lately, it's a theme
A song running through
My mind on rewind
Forms a simple statement

"Is this as good
as it gets?"

Cause I might want
A do over, since
I'm underwhelmed
To this point
In this life
The strife, the
Everyday, same way
Maze that causes
A hazy, sluggish pace

Slow motion action
Never keeping step
With the dialog
Held with myself
Dreaming in pin point
Accuracy thinking

This it it- bullseye

The shot misfires
Again and again
The target clear
But hard as I squint
Never fully in sight

I want to say
Bite me, give me
A meal that fills
Satiates, dissipates
This discontent
My emotions
Spent, sent and
Repent I must
For a life unjust
I wish I could trust
Just once what
Stands before me

Clearly a vision
I refuse to see
Opting instead
For an unrealistic plan
And in the end
Barely hanging on
By a thread

this is great
peace

love back at ya

Love this!

yes..so well understood.
I appreciate your ability to pinpoint.

Great write P....

Ohhhh girl I feel ya on this one seems the six shooter is not working maybe we need to go for the rope and the duct tape instead.

Absolutely captivating, pkd.

yeh..what she said

Awesome write A+++

Jimmy- peace to you

thanks kc

Gossipmpm-thanks

Sharris-thanks darling, you always have such great adds

MzEm-thanks-hope classes are going well

plastic- captivating...I like that word

RawB- Thanks for the great grade!!!

rope, duct tape...maybe dull the senses with a few margaritas and the shooting will improve

(((hugs))) and duct tape!

Feeling bent, slightly spent, in the need of a splint.
Troubled, all my thinking doubled, reconfirming I am puzzled.

Very nice Pam, and life has me in your state of mind.
Through your words and open heart, Truly you are. One-of-a-kind.....




If EVER that thread pulls apart,,,,
You can always fall into this man's heart. hugs...

thanks Ms Teddy

duct tape can hold all kinds of things together

T-sorry you're in my state of mind. Snapping my fingers to get you out. Luckily, my moods never last very long.

I really love this, the words come together so well. I feel that way alot.

Thank you kindly Calleigh

it!