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Topic: Save Me
ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Sat 01/02/10 05:46 PM
do you want me like I want you are you broken open from what is to be our destiny i caught a glimpse of perfection in you direction in me reflection resurrection will you be gentle with my heart in the part that says will you wear me well you said i believed foolish naive to conceive do you want me like i want you are you broken "into" memories evoked by a leaf pressed a reminder of a kiss on a bench in the fall but wait that didn't happen do you want me like i want you do you need me like i need you to save me

Dict8 Joined Tue 11/24/09 Posts: 7822	Sat 01/02/10 05:49 PM
do you want me like I want you are you broken open from what is to be our destiny i caught a glimpse of perfection in you direction in me reflection resurrection will you be gentle with my heart in the part that says will you wear me well you said i believed foolish naive to conceive do you want me like i want you are you broken "into" memories evoked by a leaf pressed a reminder of a kiss on a bench in the fall but wait that didn't happen do you want me like i want you do you need me like i need you to save me Beautiful!

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Sat 01/02/10 05:49 PM


cherie091279 Joined Thu 07/16/09 Posts: 1360	Sat 01/02/10 05:50 PM


silvertongue Joined Sat 08/25/07 Posts: 3	Sat 01/02/10 06:33 PM
lovely thoughts

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Sat 01/02/10 06:47 PM
Nice write...

agrant333 Joined Thu 11/20/08 Posts: 1762	Sat 01/02/10 06:56 PM
amazing

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Sat 01/02/10 08:10 PM


iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 01/02/10 08:20 PM
I'm glad you brought this up Slowhand,,,I missed it Art, this was very warm and sweet to read,,so ya know.. And I like it very much.. You have a very long line standing, all waiting to save you, whenever you need to be, saved, wink..

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Sat 01/02/10 08:36 PM
just lovely

Abracadabra Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 17851	Sat 01/02/10 08:44 PM
(((Sherrie))) http://users.csonline.net/designer/ideas/sunlight.mp3

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sat 01/02/10 09:09 PM
i always wonder why you dont write more...

Calleigh12 Joined Tue 04/01/08 Posts: 17193	Sat 01/02/10 09:35 PM
That's really beautiful. I like your writing style.

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Sat 01/02/10 09:38 PM
I pictured a feather wafting, just as I was about to cup it in my hand, a whisper blew it and it twirled..a beautiful expression, thank you..

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Sun 01/03/10 10:16 AM
Thank you for reading and leaving your fingerprint

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Sun 01/03/10 10:39 AM
i very much enjoyed this sherrie

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Sun 01/03/10 10:51 AM
(((Sherrie))) http://users.csonline.net/designer/ideas/sunlight.mp3 (((james))) thank you ... again! Did you re-record this?

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Sun 01/03/10 11:15 AM
i always wonder why you dont write more... maybe I will ... someday ... when I have something worthy to say ...

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Sun 01/03/10 11:42 AM
I'm glad you brought this up Slowhand,,,I missed it Art, this was very warm and sweet to read,,so ya know.. And I like it very much.. You have a very long line standing, all waiting to save you, whenever you need to be, saved, wink.. Thank you T

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Sun 01/03/10 11:51 AM
Calleigh, I very much enjoy yours as well. Thank you Sharris ... that is beautiful ... just beautiful ... I am humbled Dict Tanya Cherie Silver S1ow pkd d4tc ainjel agrant Thank you for sharing a moment with me!