Topic: One Moment of Hope
mig25's photo
Thu 12/31/09 02:35 PM
One Moment of Hope




Slowly
the hands journey the path of moments
capturing each as if it were theirs to claim

Slowly
with a quiet rhythm
never changing
yet always evolving
its hands hold yesterday’s pain
today’s prayers
and tomorrow’s hope

Slowly
as breaths are taken and born
slowly moving
as if its hands were carrying the burdens of man
slowly
moment
by moment
by moment
as if they held secrets told and untold

Slowly
tick
tock
tick
tock
never to stand still

Slowly





Sharris's photo
Thu 12/31/09 03:06 PM
Slowly it is true, methodical and continuing.
Happy New year..

no photo
Fri 01/01/10 05:37 PM
Wow man,,we think of the same at the same,,,lol
I wrote one of this thought, last night,,,
Nice words to draw-in....Thanks.drinker

jimz's photo
Fri 01/01/10 08:11 PM

One Moment of Hope




Slowly
the hands journey the path of moments
capturing each as if it were theirs to claim

Slowly
with a quiet rhythm
never changing
yet always evolving
its hands hold yesterday’s pain
today’s prayers
and tomorrow’s hope

Slowly
as breaths are taken and born
slowly moving
as if its hands were carrying the burdens of man
slowly
moment
by moment
by moment
as if they held secrets told and untold

Slowly
tick
tock
tick
tock
never to stand still

Slowly







wow, nice

kc0003's photo
Sun 01/03/10 09:12 AM
nicely done...drinker