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Sixteen days without a word
If she was alright I think I would have heard She had no reason to be gone away No. We never fought. I don't care what the neighbours say There was just the two of us. We lived alone A third on the way to make our house a home We had plans to marry come the spring As soon as I could afford to buy the ring Oh Mary Mary where are you know? This place seems so empty without you somehow If something I said or did made you go I would have stopped if you just let me know That cruddy job, I couldn't handle it Gettin' twenty bucks a day to clean up other peoples' shit And all the crying when you felt the pain... I couldn't take the pressure, no I can't take the pressure It's going to my head Oh Mary Mary tell me, are you dead? Is it just me or is it hot in here? you know that night for me just isn't very clear I was out tying one on with the guys They'll vouch for me, they'll be my alibis When I got home I heard the silence crack Voices in my head talking behind my back They laughed and laughed as I struck her to the ground But when her head hit the floor they didn't make a sound Alright. I killed her now my secret's out My hands are red and I just can't wash it out Oh Mary Mary tell me, are you dead? I can't hear a thing with all the voices in my head |
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that's pretty good animal
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Very good!!! Humm you do have a way with words. Keep up the good work.
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Romance and violence in the same poem.
Great writing! |
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good stuff!
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Good writin Animal!
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good poem Animal...
careful Cuzn... they might bite you for dragging up last years poems |
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