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Orgasmic Minds
penetration standing ovation our hearts clap souls slap when I'm inside of you you're inside of me two as one exploding in ecstasy unity you've captured me invaded my past made me see the future I'm in awe nary a flaw penetration standing ovation |
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Edited by
InnerBeauty507
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Wed 12/23/09 09:51 AM
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i like this i would totally do it as a performance piece when you read it, it flows, right off the tongue! and its tastefully written but the word nary. well Ill have to think about it :) |
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it's a mental word, nary a flaw, usually when two minds are in accord the ole cranium can't see straight and therefore notices "nary" a flaw, course in the real word, we are all flawed, even the hope diamond can be scarred.....even this poem is flawed, with "Nary", but it's the thought that counts...ha ha...thanks..
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a different turn of words..
... nary a flaw...I like it.. Finn...what was in your coffee this mornin' smiling teasingbrunette |
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<------ Stands to attention.
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10 out of 10 very clever
Anna x
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I love those words, nary, tis t'was..t'will
a lot of other things in this write..too |
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 Nice write Huck
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