Topic: ~ wounds
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Mon 12/21/09 09:57 PM
day of wounds

begins

open the passage


living phantoms

pay homage

give them due


unlace melancholy chains

scars weep

staining self

token sacrifice


close the gates

lay yourself

against it

survive

until your next


day of wounds

fastlinnie's photo
Mon 12/21/09 10:04 PM
Very niceflowerforyou

writer_gurl's photo
Mon 12/21/09 10:05 PM

:heart: it
Almost made me :cry:

Sharris's photo
Mon 12/21/09 10:09 PM
I know this.

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Tue 12/22/09 01:33 PM
flowerforyou

MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 12/22/09 01:40 PM

day of wounds

begins

open the passage


living phantoms

pay homage

give them due


unlace melancholy chains

scars weep

staining self

token sacrifice


close the gates

lay yourself

against it

survive

until your next


day of wounds




:smile: this is how I feel:smile:

BonnyMiss's photo
Tue 12/22/09 01:46 PM
Only the strongest will survive the onslaught and live to tell the tale. flowerforyou

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Tue 12/22/09 02:00 PM
strange how you meet someone and think they've never been hurt, until you look into their eyes, hmmmm....gaping wounds, must be the pink sneaks that mislead us.....Class must be really paying off, you're getting to the core now.....nice

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Tue 12/22/09 05:01 PM
I like reading everyones take on a piece of writing....
thankyou

not attending any class,Finn.

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Tue 12/22/09 05:06 PM
oh but you are, you just aren't aware of it...lol.....and we enjoy your sharing as well.....

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Tue 12/22/09 05:06 PM
ahhhh...life class

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Wed 12/23/09 09:29 AM
Dig it. Beautifully complete piece.

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Wed 12/23/09 12:06 PM
aww....thanks all of yous...for reading and writing..stuff.....teasingbrunette