Topic: Assumptions
Sharris's photo
Sat 12/12/09 08:32 AM
Assumptions

Each and every time,
So worded, these thoughts ,
Doors and windows,
No longer boarded to haunt.
Housed within,
Yet, outside the boundaries,
Living like souls
Hounded and lowly.
Draw upon these waters,
A fountain for living.
Drink from this well
Mere words, trees of leaving.
Steeped in the river,
Flowing in and out of these.
Be careful what you read
More careful, to believe.

Raine Les 12/11/2009

tanyaann's photo
Sat 12/12/09 08:44 AM
flowerforyou

MirrorMirror's photo
Sat 12/12/09 09:00 AM

Assumptions

Each and every time,
So worded, these thoughts ,
Doors and windows,
No longer boarded to haunt.
Housed within,
Yet, outside the boundaries,
Living like souls
Hounded and lowly.
Draw upon these waters,
A fountain for living.
Drink from this well
Mere words, trees of leaving.
Steeped in the river,
Flowing in and out of these.
Be careful what you read
More careful, to believe.

Raine Les 12/11/2009
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

FoxyFloridaLady's photo
Sun 12/13/09 06:32 AM
I really like your poetry, Sharris. You're a very talented writer. Have you checked out writing.com and allpoetry.com yet? They are excellent sites for sharing your own creative writing and reviewing others', many of whom welcome critiques, ideas for improvement, etc.

Sharris's photo
Sun 12/13/09 06:36 AM

I really like your poetry, Sharris. You're a very talented writer. Have you checked out writing.com and allpoetry.com yet? They are excellent sites for sharing your own creative writing and reviewing others', many of whom welcome critiques, ideas for improvement, etc.


I have a couple of sites in mind..have not checked out all and writing.com..
Thank you.