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Topic: Trust Issues
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Thu 12/10/09 02:09 PM
Looking down on the ground
traumatized by the sight of a once
vibrant and precious entity
now brutalized, viciously slaughtered
beyond recognition~

and I weep while I helplessly watch
as my hard earned Trust
lies dying at my feet …



awh@2009

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Thu 12/10/09 02:23 PM
brokenheart very sad!!:heart:

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Thu 12/10/09 02:35 PM
That is such a sad poem, MsWizard. It sounds like someone close really betrayed you (something that happens to all of us at one time or another, I think). I hope that by writing down your feelings you'll now be able to move forward and let the past go. That person - or persons - were not meant to be in your life - otherwise they would be! Hang in there.

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Thu 12/10/09 05:09 PM
Thank you Red~:heart:

Foxy, thank you for your comments. I do indeed always write my feelings down *smile* flowerforyou

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Fri 12/11/09 02:51 AM
whew...I thought you were deer hunting :wink:

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Fri 12/11/09 04:02 PM
Shame on you Mano! Come 'ere you.....grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

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Fri 12/11/09 06:17 PM

Looking down on the ground
traumatized by the sight of a once
vibrant and precious entity
now brutalized, viciously slaughtered
beyond recognition~

and I weep while I helplessly watch
as my hard earned Trust
lies dying at my feet …



awh@2009

flowers

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Sat 12/12/09 10:36 AM
flowerforyou

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Sat 12/12/09 02:50 PM

Shame on you Mano! Come 'ere you.....grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
:angel:

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Sat 12/12/09 04:16 PM

Looking down on the ground
traumatized by the sight of a once
vibrant and precious entity
now brutalized, viciously slaughtered
beyond recognition~

and I weep while I helplessly watch
as my hard earned Trust
lies dying at my feet …



awh@2009

Pawned, discarded, deliberately abandoned to slowly, yet fatally, parish without virtue.
Ever amazing and such a voice,,,,,,from such few words,wink.....

I love this and YOU,,,and have missed THESE,,,words... flowerforyou

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Sun 12/13/09 07:42 AM
flowerforyou
Looking down on the ground
traumatized by the sight of a once
vibrant and precious entity
now brutalized, viciously slaughtered
beyond recognition~

and I weep while I helplessly watch
as my hard earned Trust
lies dying at my feet …



awh@2009

Where have you been? I'm sure feeling this and I heard you have to take risk you have to trust again. Life lessons flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Sun 12/13/09 12:06 PM
Of this distilled liquor dost thou drink,
A cold and drowsy humour in the veins,
No pulse no warmth no breath stirs in the breast,
The rouge of violet tincture on your cheek tells lies.

Dishonezt ashes,
For underneath this pale vanilla death,
Trust sleeps,
Awaiting full warm virtuous lips.

flowerforyou smooched

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Sun 12/13/09 01:09 PM
Terry consider yourself hugged tighty :heart:

Carol I've been on sabbatical working on my book. It's lovely to see you again and yes, life is full of risks my lamb :heart:

My Henry (Harold!), you grace me as always with lovely and descriptive words my friend~:heart: :heart:


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Sun 12/13/09 04:19 PM
you all write so beautifully
so much talent
we have a good God?
may you all be blessed...flowerforyou

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Sun 12/13/09 04:42 PM
Lynne, yes we have a good God and for the most part good hearts. Thank you for enjoying the work lovely one :heart:

kc0003's photo
Sun 12/13/09 05:53 PM
ok, where is the rest of it?


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Sun 12/13/09 06:36 PM
powerful... great ending

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Mon 12/14/09 05:52 AM
flowerforyou

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Mon 12/14/09 07:08 AM
wow, that's what I'm talking about...what a powerful ending...Bang, a knockout....awesome

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Mon 12/14/09 09:36 AM
kc, that's the original version. *smile*

((((pkd))) :heart:

meanju2 flowerforyou

Thank you Huck Finn~flowerforyou

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