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Even Christmas trees die
Fifty years ago a small embryonic plant escaped from the bag wedged unto an earthen womb nine months to be entombed warmth from winter's cold spring brought sapling growth summer delivered handsome bud while fall winds cried the seasons came and went as sapling grasped the light only to wish for darkness for tears caress the night morning dew dissipates leaving nary a trace of the past scars upon a tree's face families laugh while children play upon thy branch of noose sway tire and rope swing lonely now peaceful journeys from traveling fowl age is a blade cutting oh so deep sap runs freely toward eternal sleep. |
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and even christmas trees die....
liking the title...sadread... teasingbrunette |
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Edited by
iam4u
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Sat 11/28/09 10:27 AM
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This, as most you do, was very, very heart felt and good.
and made me also think to much,wink I hope you won't mind. another for others to feel your write. Precious is life, so bold and free beauty becomes it, all yearning to see. we strive to take its life kill it, slowly, sawing, like a knife No remorse, no sorrow, will have it up, tomorrow dress it to shine, as we drink our wine. Its life now leaving, pleading, to let it go we hear not its crackling cries, so soft and low Dried to its core, its needed no-more. off with its shinny coat, as we drag-it out the door its tiny remains scattered, all over the floor Christmas is past, and we all had a blast as mother nature wipes away her tear, she waits in mourning, until next year. |
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Liked the write...
I can't kill a tree and never have. Some call me a fool, but I'd much rather see them alive and out in the snow rather than my living room. |
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Nice ode, you may already like this guy, if not let me introduce you:
I heard him sing this before the CD came out...he said, "I just got my divorce....on the way home I stopped and bought a train set, got home and nailed it to the dining room table" ~~~ All the best - John Prine I wish you love And happiness I guess I wish you All the best I wish you don't Do like I do And ever fall in love with Someone like you Cause if you fell Just like I did You'd probably walk around the block like a little kid. But kids don't know They can only guess How hard it is To wish you happiness I guess that love Is like a Christmas card You decorate a tree You throw it in the yard It decays and dies And the snowmen melt Well I once knew love I knew how love felt Yeah I knew love Love knew me And when I walked Love walked with me And I got no hate And I got no pride Well I got so much love That I cannot hide Say you drive a Chevy Say you drive a Ford You say you drive around the town till you just get bored Then you change your mind For something else to do And your heart gets bored with your mind and it changes you Well it's a doggone shame And it's an awful mess I wish you love I wish you happiness I wish you love I wish you happiness I guess I wish you All the best |
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nicely done...
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Truly talented work.
I seriously opened the window with your poem an hour ago and read the first couple lines and decided to give myself time to chill before I went through the journey of your words. I don't know, man. I'm just saying you write powerful stuff. And that was powerful enough to run through brick walls. I hope you understand I'm just trying to represent that I really liked this. |
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beautifully done
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I always enjoy your writing Huck ... I've missed much in my time away ... nice to see you laying pen to paper
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