Topic: Betrayal
HuckleberryFinn's photo
Thu 11/26/09 08:17 PM
Betrayal

such a very dark word
throughout the history of man
an action, swirling in deceit
running amuck with deception
there's no protection
for those vulnerable to such

the world is an abyss
a pit hiding rattlers
when we descend
we are bitten
and then express shock

buzzards circle
to witness the death
of unbreakable bondings
you'd think even they would learn
from the stench of bitterness
yet they feast upon the decay

only the bones remain
piled, like a memorial for scars
DNA for further transgressions
the science of hurt and pain
and one day we shall learn
mirrors make the best microscopes......


Ladylid2012's photo
Thu 11/26/09 08:52 PM
wow...kinda :cry: yet at the same time makes one think

Sorry, I don't know how to communicate without these :banana: things anymore.

Nice write :smile:

no photo
Thu 11/26/09 09:14 PM
Betrayal,

In her every thought,
Through her every move,
Within every word,
Masking in her eyes,
Showing through all her actions,
Hiding behind her false love,
Standing beside me always,
her only living goal,
To betray the love she stole.



GREAT WRITE,,, as it reminded me of,,,,,,so I thought I'd show ya,
We have known the same person?,,,Maybe, wink,lol,lol


sweetsimplesassy's photo
Thu 11/26/09 09:59 PM
Edited by sweetsimplesassy on Thu 11/26/09 10:00 PM

Betrayal

such a very dark word
throughout the history of man
an action, swirling in deceit
running amuck with deception
there's no protection
for those vulnerable to such

the world is an abyss
a pit hiding rattlers
when we descend
we are bitten
and then express shock

buzzards circle
to witness the death
of unbreakable bondings
you'd think even they would learn
from the stench of bitterness
yet they feast upon the decay

only the bones remain
piled, like a memorial for scars
DNA for further transgressions
the science of hurt and pain
and one day we shall learn
mirrors make the best microscopes......





WOW! such deepness! Can almost smell and feel the coldness as this is read....your wording and description is amazing....what a true gift in writing. What a sad thing to know such depth and detail on the subject, ...so true tho....I can relate.

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Thu 11/26/09 10:15 PM
life itself provides the best education, but there is no education greater than that of self.....thanks for the comments.

"If I told you my reality, you'd
say I have a great imagination,
If I told you my imagination, you'd
say I've lost touch with reality"-Bob Shank

sweetsimplesassy's photo
Thu 11/26/09 10:17 PM

life itself provides the best education, but there is no education greater than that of self.....thanks for the comments.

"If I told you my reality, you'd
say I have a great imagination,
If I told you my imagination, you'd
say I've lost touch with reality"-Bob Shank



"If I told you my reality, you'd
say I have a great imagination,
If I told you my imagination, you'd
say I've lost touch with reality"-Bob Shank


Damned if you do, damned if you dont...can never win.... ;)