Topic: @ times
d4tc's photo
Mon 11/16/09 02:11 AM







we desire

what it is
that moves
us happily

@ times
@ times

what it is
that moves
us happily

we desire

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Mon 11/16/09 05:22 AM
enjoyed the simplicity of this.....although I strongly frown upon the new (@) net slang poetry that seems to be invading us, however it wasn't that drastic and actually seemed to fit.

no photo
Tue 11/17/09 09:20 AM
:heart: smooched :heart:

pkh's photo
Tue 11/17/09 10:53 AM
enjoyed this

d4tc's photo
Tue 11/17/09 04:53 PM
Edited by d4tc on Tue 11/17/09 04:53 PM
I know what you mean about the @ sign.

This is my ode to the internet emails poem.

The @ sign was neccessary because it frames the picture I was painting.

This is the real depth of it I was trying to convey. I was not just using the sign to emphasis a alternative to the word "at"

happy

Thanks for the comments

huckle
2km
pkh

always much appreciated