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Topic: ~ curse
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Mon 11/02/09 04:32 PM
eyes closed faint rim of tears listening to rain music on glass curse mind for keepsake lovemaking body remembers aches like the first time every time

cherie091279 Joined Thu 07/16/09 Posts: 1360	Mon 11/02/09 04:46 PM
You are a great writer...

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Mon 11/02/09 06:58 PM


kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 11/02/09 08:53 PM


teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Tue 11/03/09 08:44 AM
cherie..those are pleasing and complimentary words.....thankyou. jimz,kc0033..back at ya..double..

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Tue 11/03/09 08:47 AM
nice read

HuckleberryFinn Joined Wed 09/23/09 Posts: 753	Tue 11/03/09 08:50 AM
faint rim of tears listening to rain music on glass ^read like "killing me softly"...loved this insertion, you don't say much, but what you say is powerful indeed... do you remember the first time you made love, I do, it was awesome...so what if I was by myself....lmao that should help the pain subside a tad

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Tue 11/03/09 08:57 AM
2kidsmom... nice pill. finn..women remember everything...laughs. funny you. lovemaking...keepsake..a memory only.no pain. teasingbrunette kc0003..kc0003..got it right!

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Tue 11/03/09 09:01 AM
beautifully done

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Tue 11/03/09 03:14 PM
pkd1220..thankyou & a smile.

kalunda Joined Fri 06/19/09 Posts: 284	Tue 11/03/09 08:00 PM


Sandcrab Joined Fri 10/24/08 Posts: 1392	Tue 11/03/09 09:55 PM Edited by Sandcrab on Tue 11/03/09 09:56 PM
Wow, so powerful.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 11/04/09 10:48 AM
kalunda..tis ok..smile. Sandcrab..thankyou kind sir.

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