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Darkness has fallen
Again My mind To pitiful for slumber Afraid to dream Again Clutching the sheets In a primal sweat Knowing If sleep does arrive With it It will bring Thoughts Of the Faceless man Who haunts me He The king of nightmares The ruler of the night Just waiting To chase me To intertwine His life with mine So I lie Eyes wide open Clutching the sheets Praying for daylight To scare him away My own Personal Hell Tammy |
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Darkness has fallen Again My mind To pitiful for slumber Afraid to dream Again Clutching the sheets In a primal sweat Knowing If sleep does arrive With it It will bring Thoughts Of the Faceless man Who haunts me He The king of nightmares The ruler of the night Just waiting To chase me To intertwine His life with mine So I lie Eyes wide open Clutching the sheets Praying for daylight To scare him away My own Personal Hell Tammy Or,,,lol,,,find a man who can keep you up all night making love,,,til morning breaks,wink,lol Nice poem, and I am sorry sleeping is tuff,,,,,many share that problem here,,,ME,,I could sleep beautifully,,,ANYWHERE,ANYTIME,wink,lol,lol |
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Dark dreams find sunshine every morning . . . I like this poem.
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Arrh
i roll and kick the cover restless eyes shut but acheing and my legs O so restless i kick the cover damm cover its always getting twisted never stays on i plump and flip the pillow Ahh i carnt sleep but yet? should i get out of bed? i roll and kick the cover curseing O for a silent-nite my double-bed fit for a lover but yet? damm cover i plump and flip the pillow my legs restless i kick the cover laying in bed cuz its dark not feeling tired im sick of this! laying awake mind active in till day-light comes and then i sleep bad dreams? i get night-terrors sweats and wakeing with tears. simple fact sleeping a human spends how many years? NOT ME! . i feel ya tammy! nice. X |
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Much could be read into this, course we all have our own personal nightmares.....that no one can truly understand but the one who tosses and turns.....you've explained the "fear factor" well, good job, now go to sleep and kick his ***.
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Thanks everyone!
It's morning I smile once again! ![]() |
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Darkness has fallen Again My mind To pitiful for slumber Afraid to dream Again Clutching the sheets In a primal sweat Knowing If sleep does arrive With it It will bring Thoughts Of the Faceless man Who haunts me He The king of nightmares The ruler of the night Just waiting To chase me To intertwine His life with mine So I lie Eyes wide open Clutching the sheets Praying for daylight To scare him away My own Personal Hell Tammy ![]() |
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Very expressive. Personal imagery. I really enjoyed this.
It reminds me of alcoholism... but that's just personal attachment. And whatever you wrote it about I really enjoyed reading it. |
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Darkness has fallen Again My mind To pitiful for slumber Afraid to dream Again Clutching the sheets In a primal sweat Knowing If sleep does arrive With it It will bring Thoughts Of the Faceless man Who haunts me He The king of nightmares The ruler of the night Just waiting To chase me To intertwine His life with mine So I lie Eyes wide open Clutching the sheets Praying for daylight To scare him away My own Personal Hell Tammy tammy, i love it ![]() |
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Thanks!!!
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Tammy as the darkness comes,, fear not your not alone darlin
holding you in my thoughts,, carrying you in my dreams,,,, smile,, let the tranquility of the Autumn breeze bring you peace Hugs to you ![]() |
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