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Different, Still
And different, still, these old friends, stately, solid, aged, hold their presence through seasonal complacent desires, standing through unexpected surprises, exuding awe, as tongues of flames engulfing what once was green and prolific, line the streets with their burnished reds, golds in their final magnificence flickering, blowing, dry to dead, ready to give up the ghost and fly into the wind that carries the coo of the morning doves to those places you cannot hear, lest you ride on her magic carpet swirl. Hope to replenish energies, rise in the distance as day begins to end with soft, chalky, hues, streaking, pulling through this wonder, tufts and fluff, reflecting mystery, a treasure's plunder. And not the same, as different, blink once more, an open door to thoughts of sultry nights where darkness is welcomed. Along the horizon, baring their lace, spotting the the rise and fall where the sky outlines soil, embers of autumn, not yet visible await morning light to display her garish kiss of season. Raine Les 10/20/2009 |
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very colorful, much enjoyed.....ageless wonders "leaves" nice tribute
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hey who you callin' stately and aged???
(((sadie))) |
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Seasons pass like nights into days. Mother nature showing us her wonderious ways. Great write.
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mmm, very nicely done. I could smell the world of trick-er-treating as a kid as I read this without all the hassle!
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mmm, very nicely done. I could smell the world of trick-er-treating as a kid as I read this without all the hassle! and burned calories.. |
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hey who you callin' stately and aged??? (((sadie))) mirrored nuances.. how are you? loving my grands..so good to be home.. |
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Seasons pass like nights into days. Mother nature showing us her wonderious ways. Great write. always good to see you..you are probably seeing some really beautiful season.. |
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very colorful, much enjoyed.....ageless wonders "leaves" nice tribute a pleasure to hear from you. |
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Different, Still And different, still, these old friends, stately, solid, aged, hold their presence through seasonal complacent desires, standing through unexpected surprises, exuding awe, as tongues of flames engulfing what once was green and prolific, line the streets with their burnished reds, golds in their final magnificence flickering, blowing, dry to dead, ready to give up the ghost and fly into the wind that carries the coo of the morning doves to those places you cannot hear, lest you ride on her magic carpet swirl. Hope to replenish energies, rise in the distance as day begins to end with soft, chalky, hues, streaking, pulling through this wonder, tufts and fluff, reflecting mystery, a treasure's plunder. And not the same, as different, blink once more, an open door to thoughts of sultry nights where darkness is welcomed. Along the horizon, baring their lace, spotting the the rise and fall where the sky outlines soil, embers of autumn, not yet visible await morning light to display her garish kiss of season. Raine Les 10/20/2009 |
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nicely written ms. S
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lots of burn, calories, leaves, bridges, ya know, life's usual, lol.
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nicely written ms. S A quiet man observes. |
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