Topic: They Know.
DhaliaElysian's photo
Wed 10/07/09 08:20 AM
Edited by DhaliaElysian on Wed 10/07/09 08:22 AM
The trees
pretend
that all
is calm.

They sway
away
from all
that's wrong.

The leaves
whispers
secrets
to all.

They know
humans
will one
day fall.

Sturdy
limbs of
tress crack
and break.

They know
why the
earth starts
to quake.

And the
roots know
why the
sky sighs.

They take
in it's
water
then sigh.

(C)2008


If you dont understand why I posted it this way, let me educate.

An iambic meter is a term meaning a meter used in poetry to count the syllables, or "metrical feet."

This particular poem is set at dimeter, if I remember correctly. Just two feet in each line.

Annnyyywaays. Enjoy.

no photo
Wed 10/07/09 08:52 AM
Good write....and really no need to explain why it is written in it's form...just that it is written and readflowerforyou

Englishrose2's photo
Wed 10/07/09 08:56 AM
Very nice makes you think after we, have all messed up this beautiful planet what will remain. Anna x

DhaliaElysian's photo
Wed 10/07/09 10:09 AM
Thank you, both of you.

:D

kelli91's photo
Wed 10/07/09 11:24 AM
Wow i love it DD lol
it shows thought

DhaliaElysian's photo
Wed 10/07/09 01:12 PM
Kelli i love you!

lol

"it shows thought"

xD

kalunda's photo
Wed 10/07/09 06:27 PM
flowerforyou :thumbsup:

mig25's photo
Wed 10/07/09 07:43 PM
Not only did I just learn something about poetry, I also was truly inspired to write. Thank you

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 10/07/09 08:12 PM
Neat write! Yep they know! flowers

DhaliaElysian's photo
Thu 10/08/09 10:34 AM
It's amazing how sweet everyone is on here.

Well... almost everyone. But you guys are really nice.

And I appreciate it.

no photo
Thu 10/08/09 10:56 AM
nice write.flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Fri 10/09/09 12:28 AM
i like the piece overall but, i might have to disagree with one part...(not that it is open for discussion)

"The leaves
whispers
secrets
to all."

i feel like they whisper in secret to each other...
things we will never understand...

(just my interpretation)

i look forward to seeing more of you work

flowerforyou

no photo
Fri 10/09/09 05:46 AM
:smile: flowerforyou