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Topic: What do you see
writer_gurl Joined Sat 03/01/08 Posts: 7673	Thu 10/01/09 05:36 PM
What do you see when you turn your eyes What do you see When you see me I have lost my soul Have you seen it My skin is so cold How can I warm it Laughing eyes gentle smile lover of life That was me for awhile Childish ways So innocent memories stay of sorrow and merriment Where is my soul Have you seen it Here it is so old Many emotions have persued it What do you see When you see beauty What do you see when you see me

wannacuddlewthme Joined Tue 11/11/08 Posts: 7110	Thu 10/01/09 05:37 PM
Nice write

writer_gurl Joined Sat 03/01/08 Posts: 7673	Thu 10/01/09 09:37 PM
Thank you

robert1652 Joined Wed 11/14/07 Posts: 8447	Thu 10/01/09 09:39 PM
C'est Jolie n'est-ce pas

Fusion99 Joined Thu 07/09/09 Posts: 927	Thu 10/01/09 10:11 PM


HuckleberryFinn Joined Wed 09/23/09 Posts: 753	Fri 10/02/09 06:49 AM
lyricaslly sound, a very nice flow and ring to it...Peace

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Fri 10/02/09 06:53 AM


pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Fri 10/02/09 07:10 AM
nicely done

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Fri 10/02/09 08:45 AM
very, very good jimmy

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