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Stolen Moment
Cast your weary eyes upon me As I share with you my joy, Sway with me in rhythm For I'm just another boy Your spirit speaks so softly Oh yes, it's what I hear! What's caught between our whispers Aren't heard by any ear. You baptize me in pools, Within your beauty's grace, You lift me with your soul, I'm suspended by your gaze. Look into these eyes And tell me what you see, Feel this love I dare And darlin dance with me. Get lost within this moment, I'll keep you safe from harm, Breate me deep within you, As I submit to you my heart. Fadedspirit 9/30/2009 |
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Top Bunk with this one Fadedspirit as so many of your creations in the past have been.
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good write,nice to see you
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Thanks 2KidsMom
Thanks brwnkimba, I'm honored that you liked it. Aww, thanks pkh, nice to see you too. |
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Great one Fade!
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Aww, thanks MisKim.
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very romantic poem, although I'm not a fan of the mushy gushy stuff, I found this rather captivating....nice job
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This mushy gushy stuff is what the ladies are looking for.
Need more men in this world, to show their hearts in this way... Love it {{fade}}} |
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