Topic: Last Breath
LonleyRedneck27's photo
Tue 09/01/09 10:54 PM
My fingers grip with fear,
What am I doing here,
I look,
To find its my soul they've took,
Emptyness fills me,
To the point of agony,
My death is creeping upon me,
so horrid I wish not to see,
I feel the heavy chains,
Causing so much pain,
The red blood flowing down my face,
going at a steady pace,
its getting so cold,
As all the lies unfold,
I see my death,
As I take my last breath.

pkh's photo
Wed 09/02/09 09:41 AM
welcome

mig25's photo
Wed 09/02/09 09:55 AM
Welcome . . . nice write

LonleyRedneck27's photo
Wed 09/02/09 12:31 PM
Thanks. I write all my stuff in the moment and off the top of my head

kc0003's photo
Wed 09/02/09 12:38 PM
welcome....drinker