Topic: "I'm gonna dive in"
Fusion99's photo
Tue 09/01/09 03:13 PM
Oh, I'd yearn,
try for it
Something real
odious price to learn
Nothing I can feel,
When I touch
Your Picture,
Stare at it.
Oh, stomach churn,
flutter over it
Something hard
odious emotions to spurn
What do you wanna feel
When I touch
Your Face,
Smilin', Yeah..that's it
Oh, Life turn,
embracing all of it
odious frown to return
This is what I feel
When I touch
Your Skin,
Can't keep my hands off it
Oh, We burn,
merging into it
Something NOW
Trust we have earned
What we both feel
When I touch
Your core
We've no fear of a split.

Yearn, churn, turn and burn.
Feelings I'd have,
Feelings I need.

AZKait's photo
Tue 09/01/09 03:36 PM
It's liberating to write this way...taking a deep breath...and exhaling, breaking down all the walls we've created from fear of rejection...I liked this one! Positive, hopeful, decisive...you know what you want...you put it out there...that person now needs to find you!

MzEm's photo
Tue 09/01/09 03:38 PM

Oh, I'd yearn,
try for it
Something real
odious price to learn
Nothing I can feel,
When I touch
Your Picture,
Stare at it.
Oh, stomach churn,
flutter over it
Something hard
odious emotions to spurn
What do you wanna feel
When I touch
Your Face,
Smilin', Yeah..that's it
Oh, Life turn,
embracing all of it
odious frown to return
This is what I feel
When I touch
Your Skin,
Can't keep my hands off it
Oh, We burn,
merging into it
Something NOW
Trust we have earned
What we both feel
When I touch
Your core
We've no fear of a split.

Yearn, churn, turn and burn.
Feelings I'd have,
Feelings I need.


Okay my friend, another rightous joint...

bgeorge's photo
Tue 09/01/09 03:46 PM
wowflowerforyou

Fusion99's photo
Wed 09/02/09 07:41 AM
Thanks all for reading!:smile: flowerforyou drinker

kc0003's photo
Wed 09/02/09 07:51 AM
drinker

no photo
Wed 09/02/09 07:53 AM
very nice write flowers

mig25's photo
Wed 09/02/09 08:52 AM
Nice . . . they say a picture is worth a thousand words well this piece says words can describe a beautiful picture.

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 09/02/09 10:04 AM
So many flip or glib things come to mind to say, but nope, now is NOT the time for that. Oh yeah, they may make you laugh; but, this was too touching - nicely done, fusion!

Fusion99's photo
Wed 09/02/09 11:26 AM
kcoo3,2kids,mig and diferent, Thank you for reading and commenting! I appreciate it!flowerforyou :heart: :heart: drinker drinker