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Oh, I'd yearn,
try for it Something real odious price to learn Nothing I can feel, When I touch Your Picture, Stare at it. Oh, stomach churn, flutter over it Something hard odious emotions to spurn What do you wanna feel When I touch Your Face, Smilin', Yeah..that's it Oh, Life turn, embracing all of it odious frown to return This is what I feel When I touch Your Skin, Can't keep my hands off it Oh, We burn, merging into it Something NOW Trust we have earned What we both feel When I touch Your core We've no fear of a split. Yearn, churn, turn and burn. Feelings I'd have, Feelings I need. |
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It's liberating to write this way...taking a deep breath...and exhaling, breaking down all the walls we've created from fear of rejection...I liked this one! Positive, hopeful, decisive...you know what you want...you put it out there...that person now needs to find you!
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Oh, I'd yearn, try for it Something real odious price to learn Nothing I can feel, When I touch Your Picture, Stare at it. Oh, stomach churn, flutter over it Something hard odious emotions to spurn What do you wanna feel When I touch Your Face, Smilin', Yeah..that's it Oh, Life turn, embracing all of it odious frown to return This is what I feel When I touch Your Skin, Can't keep my hands off it Oh, We burn, merging into it Something NOW Trust we have earned What we both feel When I touch Your core We've no fear of a split. Yearn, churn, turn and burn. Feelings I'd have, Feelings I need. Okay my friend, another rightous joint... |
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wow
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Thanks all for reading!
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very nice write
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Nice . . . they say a picture is worth a thousand words well this piece says words can describe a beautiful picture.
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So many flip or glib things come to mind to say, but nope, now is NOT the time for that. Oh yeah, they may make you laugh; but, this was too touching - nicely done, fusion!
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kcoo3,2kids,mig and diferent, Thank you for reading and commenting! I appreciate it!
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