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See the small girl
Why is she crying? No one can see her- Quietly dying... Buried in shame, She tries not to own. Why does her heart Always feel so alone? She wears a fake smile, so nobody knows, That hiding inside, Lives a pain that just grows. Her childhood is lost now- there's no going back, Feels like her whole world is under attack. Can't other people Look at her and tell- That she's living In a silent hell. She has been ravaged, Alone and abused. Trusting in grown ups- That trust's been misused. Won't someone help her? She bleeds where she's lying. Doesn't anyone see that She's quietly dying...? TAL 3/7/06 |
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Wow.Nice Write
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 Wow! |
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Really really nice write
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See the small girl Why is she crying? No one can see her- Quietly dying... Buried in shame, She tries not to own. Why does her heart Always feel so alone? She wears a fake smile, so nobody knows, That hiding inside, Lives a pain that just grows. Her childhood is lost now- there's no going back, Feels like her whole world is under attack. Can't other people Look at her and tell- That she's living In a silent hell. She has been ravaged, Alone and abused. Trusting in grown ups- That trust's been misused. Won't someone help her? She bleeds where she's lying. Doesn't anyone see that She's quietly dying...? TAL 3/7/06 So many times I have held waiting for her run from my arms. Wondering when she would start to breathe, if she would want to. Hoping that if only, even, will I get to see her, again. You see, I didn't want this to happen. |
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See the small girl Why is she crying? No one can see her- Quietly dying... Buried in shame, She tries not to own. Why does her heart Always feel so alone? She wears a fake smile, so nobody knows, That hiding inside, Lives a pain that just grows. Her childhood is lost now- there's no going back, Feels like her whole world is under attack. Can't other people Look at her and tell- That she's living In a silent hell. She has been ravaged, Alone and abused. Trusting in grown ups- That trust's been misused. Won't someone help her? She bleeds where she's lying. Doesn't anyone see that She's quietly dying...? TAL 3/7/06 Very good write.. very heart wrenching.. I'm sure many adults who have had bad experiences during their childhood will relate to this...  
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Love it. I could actually rap to that. It should be a new eminem rap!
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I could read this 100million times!
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AW shucks-
 you guys are "FABULOUS" !! |
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Very good write |
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