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Topic: Taking a step Back, because of love
GRIFFIN_LIZZARD Joined Mon 02/16/09 Posts: 7186	Fri 08/28/09 07:41 PM
I ran to her, I gave my heart, I ran to her, but I jumped the start, She is fine, She is true, She reminded me, We have a lot to do, Friends at first, and nothing more, Problem is, She's the one I adore. Someday soon, I expect to find, She'll be gone, I stepped over the line. I want her to know, She has my heart, In case she wants, To really start. (to my love) I'm here waiting.

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Fri 08/28/09 07:45 PM
ohhhh ...hoping things turn out the way you want

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD Joined Mon 02/16/09 Posts: 7186	Fri 08/28/09 07:48 PM
me to....

Meg8771 Joined Fri 01/16/09 Posts: 5662	Fri 08/28/09 07:53 PM
Beautiful...I pray you will find happiness

mscherbear Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 15111	Fri 08/28/09 07:54 PM
(((Griff)))

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD Joined Mon 02/16/09 Posts: 7186	Fri 08/28/09 08:16 PM
Thanks all

Holly4459 Joined Sun 06/29/08 Posts: 34785	Sat 08/29/09 08:57 AM


Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Sat 08/29/09 08:59 AM
Wonderful I send love! Tammy

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sat 08/29/09 09:15 AM
very nice,wish you the best

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD Joined Mon 02/16/09 Posts: 7186	Sun 03/28/10 01:51 PM
thought I would find this one from long ago.... and show it off...

DaveyB Joined Wed 10/10/07 Posts: 18786	Sun 03/28/10 03:59 PM
Nicely done Griff

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD Joined Mon 02/16/09 Posts: 7186	Sun 03/28/10 06:18 PM
thanks Dave

dnc4Him Joined Fri 11/14/08 Posts: 2035	Sun 03/28/10 06:26 PM
very beautiful!

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