Topic: Lost in pain
Iam_aditi's photo
Wed 08/26/09 06:39 AM
Edited by Iam_aditi on Wed 08/26/09 06:40 AM
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wake me no more … I m tired…..
Don’t touch me I m fragile…
Inside out… I m so sore…
You don’t see the scar.. I don’t show you the pain..
…it’s the same story time n time again…
wake me no more…
touch me no more….

I shrink with your touch.. .
I shriek at your thought..
The caress..love n the brew..
Sinful …scare… wraps me through…
Fantasy nights crumbled underneath

Our bed…Hope n its Death
Not a drop of love left
On the roses I kissed…
I shrink at your name…
I shriek at your thought…

Wake me no more…
Touch me no more…..
I am tired….
Bury me in my past….
With the Love underneath !!.......

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Ladylid2012's photo
Wed 08/26/09 06:40 AM
flowers

Iam_aditi's photo
Wed 08/26/09 06:42 AM
wow , thank u ladylid !flowers

no photo
Wed 08/26/09 07:48 AM
flowerforyou drinker flowerforyou

artman48's photo
Wed 08/26/09 07:53 AM
there trying to get an arts/craft section on mingle---poems are. hope you get on it when it shows up---very nice!:smile:

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 08/26/09 08:12 AM
Very goodbigsmile welcome to the site hope to see more of you writes.......:thumbsup:

Iam_aditi's photo
Wed 08/26/09 09:09 AM
I am SOOOO HAPPY !!flowerforyou

Thank you soo soooo much for the encouragement...
I don't write ,but,I wrote this long time back,when I was
sad and down !

So sweet of you to give me such lovely comments.
flowerforyou flowers
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Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 08/26/09 09:11 AM
Most awesome write!

Fusion99's photo
Wed 08/26/09 09:13 AM

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wake me no more … I m tired…..
Don’t touch me I m fragile…
Inside out… I m so sore…
You don’t see the scar.. I don’t show you the pain..
…it’s the same story time n time again…
wake me no more…
touch me no more….

I shrink with your touch.. .
I shriek at your thought..
The caress..love n the brew..
Sinful …scare… wraps me through…
Fantasy nights crumbled underneath

Our bed…Hope n its Death
Not a drop of love left
On the roses I kissed…
I shrink at your name…
I shriek at your thought…

Wake me no more…
Touch me no more…..
I am tired….
Bury me in my past….
With the Love underneath !!.......

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I havent seen your work before and this is a good first impression. 'Lost in life, what can you do? Laugh, oh, so quietly'
Cant wait to see more!flowerforyou :heart: drinker