Topic: Insomnia
Gossipmpm's photo
Fri 08/21/09 12:44 AM
Late night. Early morn

The sun running into the moon

This time of day has no reason
Except to let words flow
There is no one alive now
The world lays sleeping
As I fight the awakeness that haunts me

Insomnia takes it's grip on me
Of which I can't escape
Waiting for the brightness of day
To reclaim me once again

Total darkness and quiet stillness abound
Except for the sound of others sleeping and infomercials
Keeping me company

I pray to the godess of sleep
To take me in her arms and sprinkle
Me with the sands of slumber
Letting my mind rest if for only a minute

Insomnia in my mind





Tammy

MirrorMirror's photo
Fri 08/21/09 09:56 AM

Late night. Early morn

The sun running into the moon

This time of day has no reason
Except to let words flow
There is no one alive now
The world lays sleeping
As I fight the awakeness that haunts me

Insomnia takes it's grip on me
Of which I can't escape
Waiting for the brightness of day
To reclaim me once again

Total darkness and quiet stillness abound
Except for the sound of others sleeping and infomercials
Keeping me company

I pray to the godess of sleep
To take me in her arms and sprinkle
Me with the sands of slumber
Letting my mind rest if for only a minute

Insomnia in my mind





Tammy
flowerforyou

Fusion99's photo
Fri 08/21/09 10:04 AM

Late night. Early morn

The sun running into the moon

This time of day has no reason
Except to let words flow
There is no one alive now
The world lays sleeping
As I fight the awakeness that haunts me

Insomnia takes it's grip on me
Of which I can't escape
Waiting for the brightness of day
To reclaim me once again

Total darkness and quiet stillness abound
Except for the sound of others sleeping and infomercials
Keeping me company

I pray to the godess of sleep
To take me in her arms and sprinkle
Me with the sands of slumber
Letting my mind rest if for only a minute

Insomnia in my mind





Tammy
Tammy, I really like this evolution of your style. And I can relate to this, I've been plagued by insomnia since my early teens. It really does suck. Great write!drinker drinker

mig25's photo
Fri 08/21/09 11:49 AM
I love this!!!

Gossipmpm's photo
Fri 08/28/09 10:18 AM
Thanks guys:heart:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 08/28/09 12:51 PM
I call it "restless mind syndrome" lol flowerforyou

che_'s photo
Fri 08/28/09 06:44 PM
I completely relate as I too have dificult times sleeping... awesome descriptions great write!

Gossipmpm's photo
Fri 08/28/09 08:32 PM
I call it agonizing!!

kc0003's photo
Fri 08/28/09 08:41 PM
flowerforyou