Topic: untitled
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Sat 08/15/09 11:29 AM

.she sits at her mothers house
thinking about the way things
use to be, and i'm not being conceited
but hell i even know that she thinks
about me......

living off of other peoples mean
never made anything of herself
but now her jar of broken dreams
\sits on top of a broken shelf

oh you know she had her way with me
and the others that came before
but to be quite honest
it dont matter to me
and hell whose keeping score

she's never sent one dime
of child support and its as if the
kid doesn't exist
and its hard to believe
that the worst time of my life
began with a simple kiss


....so for now,.. i've vowed not
to fall in love again i really don't
need the drama,so instead of looking
for love next time...i'll just look
for a sugar mama...:wink:


writings from the tombs...smokin

inthemeantime's photo
Sat 08/15/09 11:37 AM

cool dude"

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Sat 08/15/09 11:57 AM


..thank you...smokin

writer_gurl's photo
Sat 08/15/09 12:03 PM
:wink:Nice :tongue:

Fusion99's photo
Sat 08/15/09 12:03 PM
The overall message is sad, but the end makes me laughlaugh laugh Great job!

Gossipmpm's photo
Sat 08/15/09 12:09 PM
Nice:heart:

AngelLight's photo
Sun 08/16/09 06:08 AM

The overall message is sad, but the end makes me laughlaugh laugh Great job!



I agree...nice job tom smokin

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Sun 08/16/09 07:00 AM


.... a little thing i taught myself was to try and make something funny out of what would be a sad situation..tho it may not make it any better...if you find a way of making yourself laugh..it makes you feel less sad ..after all you cant change the past..but you can change your view of it ..HAVA GOOD DAY...smile2

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Sun 08/16/09 07:04 AM
nice