Topic: Bill
DaveyB's photo
Thu 08/13/09 02:35 PM
Edited by DaveyB on Thu 08/13/09 02:36 PM
Bill

What a life you led
sewing so much seed
So much time spent
helping others in need

Your last years of life
lived in pain and grief
Yet you revelled in side
and offered sweet relief

To those around you
only some whom you knew
offering blankets and shelter
and home made stew

You had so little yourself
in money and possession.
Yet you held great joy,
in giving without concession

Spending days on the streets
collecting cans and bottles.
Then giving the proceeds
to churches and hostles.

I know you started life
with selfish desire
But your joy in giving
makes that life a liar.

I know who you are now
and who you wanted to be.
Now your life here is over
but your heart is set free.

MzEm's photo
Thu 08/13/09 02:37 PM
Absolutly beautiful, what a wonderful way to remember your dad-in-law...

Sharris's photo
Thu 08/13/09 02:39 PM

Bill

What a life you led
sewing so much seed
So much time spent
helping others in need

Your last years of life
lived in pain and grief
Yet you revelled in side
and offered sweet relief

To those around you
only some whom you knew
offering blankets and shelter
and home made stew

You had so little yourself
in money and possession.
Yet you held great joy,
in giving without concession

Spending days on the streets
collecting cans and bottles.
Then giving the proceeds
to churches and hostles.

I know you started life
with selfish desire
But your joy in giving
makes that life a liar.

I know who you are now
and who you wanted to be.
Now your life here is over
but your heart is set free.


so much good to hold

Naturegirl517's photo
Thu 08/13/09 02:39 PM
Very nice it truely is how life works:thumbsup:

DaveyB's photo
Thu 08/13/09 02:43 PM
Edited by DaveyB on Thu 08/13/09 02:53 PM

Absolutly beautiful, what a wonderful way to remember your dad-in-law...


Thank you 'twas comments from everyone here, in particular yours and MsWizard's, that prompted me to think it was something I should write and share... so thank you flowerforyou

DaveyB's photo
Thu 08/13/09 02:44 PM

Very nice it truely is how life works:thumbsup:


certainly is when it works right :smile:

DaveyB's photo
Thu 08/13/09 02:45 PM

so much good to hold


Yes it is.

Naturegirl517's photo
Thu 08/13/09 02:52 PM
no kidding every minute counts u never know when the road stops. :smile:

DaveyB's photo
Thu 08/13/09 02:58 PM

no kidding every minute counts u never know when the road stops. :smile:


Something I know all too well. His daughter, my wife died two years ago at the age of 40.

Naturegirl517's photo
Thu 08/13/09 03:21 PM
tragic it takes time to heal but you've always have memories. flowerforyou

MirrorMirror's photo
Thu 08/13/09 03:22 PM

Bill

What a life you led
sewing so much seed
So much time spent
helping others in need

Your last years of life
lived in pain and grief
Yet you revelled in side
and offered sweet relief

To those around you
only some whom you knew
offering blankets and shelter
and home made stew

You had so little yourself
in money and possession.
Yet you held great joy,
in giving without concession

Spending days on the streets
collecting cans and bottles.
Then giving the proceeds
to churches and hostles.

I know you started life
with selfish desire
But your joy in giving
makes that life a liar.

I know who you are now
and who you wanted to be.
Now your life here is over
but your heart is set free.

:thumbsup:

Gossipmpm's photo
Thu 08/13/09 03:27 PM
He sounds like he was a beautiful person!:heart:

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 08/13/09 05:01 PM
What a beautiful soul he had and will always be remembered for it..... good writebigsmile

DaveyB's photo
Fri 08/14/09 01:33 AM

What a beautiful soul he had and will always be remembered for it..... good writebigsmile


He had his dark side, but I choose to remember this. He was truly one of the more unconditionally giving people I've ever know.

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 08/14/09 01:42 AM


What a beautiful soul he had and will always be remembered for it..... good writebigsmile


He had his dark side, but I choose to remember this. He was truly one of the more unconditionally giving people I've ever know.

But............don't we all have a dark side just at times we give a glimpse to whom we truly are..........flowerforyou

DaveyB's photo
Fri 08/14/09 01:52 AM



What a beautiful soul he had and will always be remembered for it..... good writebigsmile


He had his dark side, but I choose to remember this. He was truly one of the more unconditionally giving people I've ever know.

But............don't we all have a dark side just at times we give a glimpse to whom we truly are..........flowerforyou



This is different but, I choose not to explain further. This memory is that part the deserves to be shared.

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 08/14/09 01:55 AM
Understood flowers bigsmile flowers

d4tc's photo
Fri 08/14/09 07:49 AM
awesome write! happy

DaveyB's photo
Fri 08/14/09 07:59 AM

awesome write! happy


Thank you drinker