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Topic: More Than a Muse
kc0003's photo
Wed 08/12/09 03:51 PM

For some reason a song was playing in my head as I read this delightful poem ...


***singing*** "she's always a woman to me ..."



:heart: flowerforyou





ok, not the tune i had in my head but, at least it does sing...laugh

:heart: flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Wed 08/12/09 03:54 PM

This is so much better than some of the mindless rambling we see here lately

Bravo

I like it when you have something to say.





laugh yes and that one died very fast laugh


thank you my friend....drinker

Mystique42's photo
Wed 08/12/09 03:56 PM
Loved it!flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Wed 08/12/09 03:58 PM

Loved it!flowerforyou



thank you very much

flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Wed 08/12/09 04:03 PM

just beautifully written flowerforyou flowerforyou





thank you (P)
its nice of you to drop by

flowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 08/12/09 11:44 PM


This is so much better than some of the mindless rambling we see here lately

Bravo

I like it when you have something to say.





laugh yes and that one died very fast laugh


thank you my friend....drinker





yes it did laugh

LAMom's photo
Thu 08/13/09 09:00 AM
Yes "it" is
the circle of life
the knowing that all is, just is
Love surrounds you
You core hole
singing once again
Your soul,,,, Home:heart:

kc0003's photo
Thu 08/13/09 10:12 AM

Yes "it" is
the circle of life
the knowing that all is, just is
Love surrounds you
You core hole
singing once again
Your soul,,,, Home:heart:




thank you mom

:heart: :heart: :heart:

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 08/14/09 10:24 AM
Wow I just read this it totally floored me don't change a thing this is perfect.....................I'm amazed not that you have not caught my eye before on what you have wrote just this one the feelings come through and it flows like silk....:thumbsup:

no photo
Fri 08/14/09 02:21 PM

Wow I just read this it totally floored me don't change a thing this is perfect.....................I'm amazed not that you have not caught my eye before on what you have wrote just this one the feelings come through and it flows like silk....:thumbsup:







:thumbsup: smokin

Fusion99's photo
Fri 08/14/09 03:53 PM

She sings like
An angel

Her voice
Colors pastels

She’s held
Together with
Ribbons
And bows

She’s as fragile as
Can be
And as tough as
She needs

Where she
Comes from
Nobody
Knows

But,

She came
At the right time
To get me,

In my mind

She’s a woman
Of the finest
Design

She walks like
A lady
Sometimes talks
Like a baby
She’s a diamond
Just waiting
To shine



She floats like
A feather
In the calmest
Of weather
So lightly
She falls
To my bed
My fingers
Work pages
Familiar phrases
Of a novel
I’ve already
Read

I’ve loved you
Forever
Now I know you
It’s better

Than I could
Have ever
Possibly dreamed

You may not
Have been right
For the others
In your life
But, you’re
Perfectly
Perfect
For me



kc09

still playing with the form on this one...who knows???
The form is great, I like to write in the "run on" style. Don't change anything or I'm gonna be mad! laugh laugh drinker :thumbsup:

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