Topic: Feeling, I
Sharris's photo
Tue 08/11/09 02:00 PM
Feeling I

I think when I see your heart
I am allowed to cry.
The strength that I have had to hold
can be buried deep inside.
It is then that I feel I may
Go on to the next step higher
I think that when I see your eyes,
I realize a friend's inspire.

Raine Les 8/11/2009

Fusion99's photo
Tue 08/11/09 03:04 PM

Feeling I

I think when I see your heart
I am allowed to cry.
The strength that I have had to hold
can be buried deep inside.
It is then that I feel I may
Go on to the next step higher
I think that when I see your eyes,
I realize a friend's inspire.

Raine Les 8/11/2009
Very nice!:thumbsup: I have a haiku inspired by this:

Heavy Load

heavy load, feelings
Oh, to drop them to the ground!
I give my hand,Rise!

MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 08/11/09 10:11 PM

Feeling I

I think when I see your heart
I am allowed to cry.
The strength that I have had to hold
can be buried deep inside.
It is then that I feel I may
Go on to the next step higher
I think that when I see your eyes,
I realize a friend's inspire.

Raine Les 8/11/2009
flowerforyou