Thoughts A Distance

Makes you wonder,
just how long one can go,
without that closeness,
when missing is so,
voluminous, probing
those tender thoughts travel,
weaving through out
in between the unravel.
I do not know,
how long it will be.
This one thing
I certainly feel.
As long as I breathe
and feel you each day,
I will love you,
Even more while you're away.

Raine Les 8/7/2009

I like this one too...

A boy trapped as a man
treating life as his own personal play land
I wish I could relate to him
however I can't...
I simply just don't understand.
His fate is unknown for he is all alone.
He is a lost soul in a sea of evil
A fool for missing out on everything wonderful in life
for the ugliness found inside a glass pipe
Three children all without their dad is really all too sad.
There is no point getting angry or mad
However I still wish I had my dad.
Sand is running out of the hour glass
feelings have become sour towards you dad..
Still a boy trapped as a man
we wait for you to grow up ...
and finally become a man.

Withheld

You cannot recapture
what has left this land
the moments that fell
that poured from your hand.

All too soon you have to know
what is planted
will reap
will sow.

I cannot give back
what he took away
how he left us
What is there to say.

And this I know
all so well intended
this grief like a chain
connected and bended

Will break though the strongest
as love drawn from your well
Forgiveness intended
withheld is my hell.

Raine Les 8/7/2009

nice writing ladies

nice write....

I have these thoughts every day Lady.
Distance only effects you if you let it.

Beautiful writes ladies

mmmm, "Withheld" is an awesome wrITE! I'm really likin the Whoop, there it is-ness.