| Topic: What do you think of my profile? | |
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      Hey all,
 I was just wondering what people thought of my profile? I don't get many responses from people, so I was just wondering if I did something wrong or wrote something that I probably shouldn't have. I just try to be honest in it, and I guess if people don't appreciate that, then I don't know what to say. But I'm just curious is to if I can get a good honest answer on my profile. I'd appreciate any advice or comments. Thanks much. | |
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      Its a little bit waffley, i think you need to make it slighly more punchy and break it up into paragraphs. Also get a picture a bit more close up, that will increase your views.
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      Yeah, one giant paragraph can be punishing.
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      Ok I'll do that, thanks. If I can get another picture, or to get someone to take another picture of me, then I'll do that to. Thanks for letting me know.
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