Goodbye, my friend
Seems
We’ve come to
The end
Though I hate
Them
I must say…

Goodbye

Goodbye my sweet
Through these
Tears I see
The flight
Of a
Single dove
It’s always been you
With this
Bittersweet
View
But, I could have
Used
Just a little
More love

Farewell, adieu
Please
Look after you
And when
You think
Of me
Try not
To cry
I’m not what you
Wished
I’ve resigned
Myself, this
And by the
Cowards way
I shall fly

Goodbye
To those
I can’t
Look
In the eye
I can’t say it
So I
Write you…

Goodbye




kc09

I really enjoyed reading your poem... Made me think of someone I've just recently pretty much said goodbye to

Beautiful as always K, your style is always on point....

Grrreat, Snagglepuss, now I'm wondering why it's never "Stage Right?"

Immediately reminded me of Beyonce's song "To The Left" :) lol

Very nice write K...

Great Write!

Really nice write.

This reads like a suicide note to me.

Poetic but still.
Do we need to talk?

{{{KC}}}

That's what I'm talking about! Feelings and Life, great job at writing "goodbye"!

you were right 4 emails all wondering what happened...i said nothing he was just writing..they said oh ok we were worried..lol

i know, i should have included the disclaimer like we talked about...lol

Great write man,,and keep them reading..
I liked it but I hate the leave with no eye to eye or voice,,but hey,,its a poem damn it,,,cheers,,,lol

first of all thank you
each of you who took the time to post

this was just another look into the "power of goodbye" an exercise if you will. we all face them in our lives and they come in many forms.
when i posted the last one "dichotomy" i realized all the emotion that seeps from these awful words when they are put in this order so, i thought i might explore it again.

that being said...how is it that maleah gets the emails?
i mean not one did i recieve...hmmmm...guess that speaks well for you sweetheart...lol...lol

again thank you all for putting up with me

meandu2, are you going to reach out-n-touch him now or wait to do it in person? Seems like a "Gibbs"(reference to NCIS TV show) moment to me!

great write as always