Topic: Had It
d4tc's photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:40 PM


Obviously
I love me

Or else
I'd be

dead

as

a chained door
to a store
out of business

what is this
madness?

if you saw
me now

you'd see me
at my saddest

flickering
flamming retinas

inner self
degrading
sad mess

get me those
pills

on
the top shelf
of the cabinet

i think yes
I think
I have had
enough

i feel weak
ends trend
no love

and the other
days require
less drugs

as it works
it pulls
and i chug

a drug

ME

i fly

FREE

if only i
was hooked
on someone

like she


no photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:44 PM
smooched :heart: love :heart: smooched

(((((d4tc)))))flowers

kc0003's photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:45 PM
nice write
enjoyed this one

drinker

no photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:46 PM
Fantastic...:thumbsup:

lonetar25's photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:47 PM
Edited by lonetar25 on Fri 07/24/09 06:48 PM
wicked piece d4tc :thumbsup:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:48 PM
flowerforyou

Someday you will be intoxicated by love...

d4tc's photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:55 PM

flowerforyou

Someday you will be intoxicated by love...



love love love love love
that was a very nice thing to say!
bigsmile Thank You MsTeddy! bigsmile


you just gave me an idea for a write :banana:


also, thank you lonestar, ainjel, kc and 2km

i hope you all have a great weekend!
drinker flowers

no photo
Fri 07/24/09 07:27 PM
Nice poem my friend:heart: drinker :banana:

ArtGurl's photo
Fri 07/24/09 07:38 PM
"There must
still be
some life
in these eyes."

:wink:



You will love again and she will be a lucky one indeed ... :heart: flowerforyou

ArtGurl's photo
Fri 07/24/09 07:38 PM
Edited by ArtGurl on Fri 07/24/09 07:38 PM
...and I really like this piece flowers

d4tc's photo
Fri 07/24/09 07:53 PM
Thank You ArtGurl and 10001




Toxicless Love
(inspired by MsTeddy)



Patience

Greatness
of the wait
im under

goodbye winters
hello summers

sitting at
a little round
brown table
eating cherry
jello

poking it with
my spoon just
to watch it
wobble

there was a
time i wanted
one at full
throttle

gripping her
tighter than
this bottle

surely
intoxicated

i knew
slowing down
knowing now
what hurt how

much pain
as such
chained to
thoughts of
love

was it too much
to want to be
rode?

sucked?
and mentioned?

or were these
eyes always
destined to
be crimsoned?

no photo
Fri 07/24/09 08:02 PM
wow...really nice..makes me

I really enjoyed this.very heart felt.drinker


smooched :heart: love drool :banana: drinks pitchfork blushing smokin bigsmile smooched :heart:


MzEm's photo
Fri 07/24/09 09:53 PM
:heart: :heart: