What do you think? Thanks in advance for the feedback!!

About what honey ?

about my profile. I want you to rate my profile

Welcome

Thanks!

Welcome to mingle.

Have fun and go to the forums.

Well, the profile doesn't reveal much about who you are as an individual. Everything you listed is a bit generic. You did state you don't like talking about yourself, but this is the opportunity when people WANT to read about you, so take advantage of it!

i'd probably hit it

i thought it was cute!

your smile is infectious and you kept it short and sweet. :)

It's a little bit short even if sweet (like you) nobody (most) are not fan of writing our life story but it's the price to pay in the hope that the right person will find us.

Ya need to make your words about you sound FUN,,EXCITING,,,YOUR GREAT!!!!! Because it reads,,,,,a little boring,,,so spice it up with some funny or up-lifting roll as you tell us all about how interesting you are,wink..And a few more pics might be nice.
Over-all, your pretty and a sexy smile, NOW, make un want to LOOK and READ!!! Thats my best for ya..

I would add something about what your looking for in a person.

Renaissance...

pretty

Very pretty.

But you say that you are smart but the very next word in your profile isn't spelled right. lol

Just an observation.

Welcome to the site. :-)

Thank you everyone for your feedback. And justaguy, being smart and being able to spell are two very different things. I will never claim that I'm a good speller. As a matter of fact I suck at spelling. I'm a big spell check person.

It doesn't matter if you think you're smart; poor spelling and grammar give the opposite impression. When you're online, that is what matters! You don't have the opportunity, as you do in person, to prove otherwise except through the written word. If you're not sure of how a word is spelled (such as "Renaissance") then use an old fashioned dictionary (there are plenty online), since spell checkers are know to be poor at catching everything.

p.s. I've never met a _really_ smart person who was a poor speller in their native language.

lol,I could debate that one with you,wink,,,
I am to say the least a BAD speller and my grammer sucks as well,,but to say them I am NOT smart,,,would be a lie by ANY standard.

Actually, you're right on that. I thought about it again and realised that one of the smarter guys I know is a terrible speller! He has learned very well how to use resources and check his work. But if he's writing something by hand there is almost guaranteed to be at least one error. He is dyslexic, so that does make a difference. I guess bad spelling can happen with even the smartest people! This said, of course, has nothing to do with simply typing poorly and missing errors in checking it - anybody could do that. (i.e. Renissence... Renaissance). With an online profile it is always a good idea to go back a few hours or days later and have a fresh look to see if there are any such errors.