Sorrid seas of passions,
waiting for you to drown in....
they're right outside the dooor,
even pooling on floors....
Such a stench that rises,
Sex and Smoke and Subtle perfumes
And I'd said, "Take me with you!"
they're waiting for just a few
they're the lies,
that want to drown inside you....
You can see people everyday,wading in
I can see them splashing about,
I can see them falling from within,
I can see them laughing, even pout,
a few are yelling, they wanna be let out!

-clouds fuming thunder,
waves start to harm-

You can feel them get sucked under
wide-eyed with flailing arms
You can feel hysteria swelling
coming from somewhere!, out in the sea!
Where are those people that were yelling?
I don't know, I can't see
out here, there's really no telling....
They're all drowning in these passions
They're all drowing in this fashion
I want to be there with you, laughing,laughing,laughing
But I'm floating on more sallow seas,
coupled with a gentle breeze....
but I wish I were drowning
I wish anything but floating on this shallow breeze....

Interesting write

Floaters And Sinkers

You share a float with someone
hers is very small
barely holding what she sees
not holding want at all.
He said that he would find her,
just wait for soon he'd come
patiently the longing
rises and sinks some.
Hope used to be so buoyant
it's swirling in the void
Now I know, I'm not alone
I look and see your float.
Sometimes, though I cannot feel
the water is so cold
Just a bit of warmth, please
to feel the sandy shore.
Yes, I would drown
feel the the torrid
if only just a moment.
The cost perhaps
would be too great,
As long as there is breath
I pray that love
will find us soon,
this passion is as death.

Raine Les 7/23/2009

{{{Sadie}}} Like your response poem, especially...

I pray that love
will find us soon,
this passion is as death.

Oh but to open water wings and fly!!

I really like this Fussion

Thank you, All, especially Sadie!