When I look into your eyes,
I try my best to see,
if I'm everything you dream of
if this love is meant to be.

I look deeper finding questions,
and a past of loneliness,
but I also see a light,
trying to fill your emptiness.

You want me to understand,
that your afraid to fall again
Your heart cant take more pain
and I dont know how its been.

But let me tell you something,
I've had my share of pain,
yet, through it all I learned
that there a rainbows after rain.

Let me be the answer,
to the confusion of your soul.
I'll be the hand that guides you.
I'll make your spirit whole.

Looking in your eyes,
I see you need to find,
A love to mend your broken heart,
So let me give you mine.

that was cool, and i also like how it didnt rhyme...thats great

oh wait it rhyme im sorry,but it still is good...

I rarely rhyme. You should read the other poem I wrote today.

ahh, a broken lightbulb on your forehead
will tell you ,you want the light turned out..
someone yelling and yelling so much you smash
youre head through the front window just
to mellow you out...

as you walk away from the darkness and sit
up on the roof wondering why am i here
and then rip up books and slash waterbeds
the blood flowing from your eyes and ears
and its lucky you didnt get stictches and just go to sleep..


then go to work the next day
after sleeping in a bush by the 711
cold as **** without a coat
you just might take the bus to heaven

and then your pissed cause some guy
cheated you in cards and wanted that broken light back
cause they need that light to rob you
so you broke his back
threw him down the stairs and it made a good sounding smack
but you give him a coat when he woke up and all is good
and what you have learned from life is understood....

sorry baby, thats part of my life and way rhymed too much..

it's okay and it was a very enjoyable read

I hate poetry that people write just to say, I write poetry.

I prefer it from the heart

your so cool......you made me ryhme damnit!!

very nice...

im just trying to do a bukowski, if anyone here knows who that is?

Nice Write HE

Kudos!!

Really very nice....beautiful

damn, no one dug my poem....