Topic: sunshine and darkness
mythicalman22's photo
Fri 07/03/09 12:33 AM
my soul is neverending through the shadows I'm desending
to the light bending through my heartbeat pending
cracking lightning lending me the direction to my ending
visions now blending in with a means condescending
hopeless fear contending with the joyousness ascending
time is now pretending to deminish my minds mending
I hope that me sending this letter is not construed offending
the light is now beginning to enter my eyes once more
the sight of angels wings and white gates on the shore
there flight is more ammusing now then I had envisioned before

HasidicEnforcer's photo
Thu 07/16/09 11:18 PM
and you thought I never read your poems.

I think you are brilliant and glad to have you in my life

mythicalman22's photo
Thu 07/16/09 11:25 PM
lol, thanks for making me feel better...My poems arent really that good though, they are kind of sloppy as of lately and are hard to decypher, there is allways a meaning in there though

HasidicEnforcer's photo
Thu 07/16/09 11:26 PM
share with me all you got.

I love your poetry

Fusion99's photo
Fri 07/17/09 03:38 PM

lol, thanks for making me feel better...My poems arent really that good though, they are kind of sloppy as of lately and are hard to decypher, there is allways a meaning in there though
this one is pretty good...but who are you writing to?

mythicalman22's photo
Fri 07/17/09 09:14 PM
the letter is written for the heavens to whoever is listening..Thank you by the way

kc0003's photo
Fri 07/17/09 09:20 PM
like this one...nicely done drinker

Tocheeky4U's photo
Wed 07/29/09 07:58 AM
this one is genious

MzEm's photo
Wed 07/29/09 08:12 AM
flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 07/29/09 08:15 AM
drinker flowers

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 07/29/09 05:18 PM
flowerforyou