Topic: You shoulda
tribefan73's photo
Wed 05/13/09 10:17 AM
You shoulda told me...





...about the danger!





I didn't see it coming...





...there was no warning.





Where were they?





I didn't see them!





The signs, the signs!





No markers...





...buoys...





...flags...





... red lights...





...nothing?!





Somebody shoulda warned me.





Surely, somebody knew, but...





...would I have listened?





Heeded the warnings...





...the urgent pleas...





...to turn back before...





But, now it's...





...too late for me...





...there's no way out?!





The torture is excruciating!!!





The longing, the aching...





...they're intolerable!!!





You can't sleep...





...the mind countlessly recounting...





...the previous days'encounter.





The "innocent" verbal banter...





...the mental images of...





...pleasures and delights...





...yet to be.





You don't want to eat...





...eating pales in comparison...





...to drinking in the...





...essence.





You can't function...





...after prolonged exposure...





...caught up in the...





...flowerlike aroma of...





...she





They tell you about...





...the dangers of addiction to...





...nicotine...





...cocaine...





...crack...





...even the big H...





...heroin.





Nothing, I mean nothing...





...about the addictive powers...





...of M.





You shoulda told me.

ArtGurl's photo
Wed 05/13/09 10:19 AM
Ahhh, gotta love the chemical cocktail of infatuation flowerforyou

SimplyElla's photo
Wed 05/13/09 10:40 AM
flowerforyou that was simply a nice write

MzEm's photo
Wed 05/13/09 10:45 AM
Great write, had me pulled right in...

no photo
Wed 05/13/09 11:13 AM
:thumbsup:

nvkikigirl's photo
Wed 05/13/09 01:56 PM
Wonderful!
waving :thumbsup:

"drinking in the essence"

That's my fave part.



tribefan73's photo
Wed 05/13/09 08:10 PM
Thanks ladies for the kind words & approvals.