Topic: He Whistles
Sharris's photo
Wed 05/13/09 08:47 AM

He Whistles

On the way to his place
With his pole in his hand
Looking all around him
To spend his day as planned

His creel and his tackle
Worms wriggling, spilling
Awaiting their fate
Hook's threaded, unwilling

He whistles a tune
I have heard most my life
His shoulders relaxed
Today no strife.

Many a day
He spent his time
Thinking and planning
Sometimes he'd whine

Why can't I go
Why stay here
The fish are out biting
I feel them so near

Oh, if I had a net
They'd jump right in
Or I could grab them quick
Is a fish lie a sin?

Once in a while now
When he gets that look
You can tell he wants
To bait that hook.

His body's not the
Young he once was
His mind still alive
He doesn't fish becuz.

But, oh, can he whistle
when he walks down that road
you'd never know he was older
It's the way he always blowed.

Raine Les 5/13/2009


no photo
Wed 05/13/09 08:51 AM
Love this Sadie...reminds me of my Dadflowerforyou flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Wed 05/13/09 09:17 AM
Sometimes indeed, the simplest things in life make us the happiest flowerforyou

Abracadabra's photo
Wed 05/13/09 09:37 AM
This is nice Sadie. I especially like the last two stanzas. :wink:

They kind of hit home I'm afraid to say. laugh

MirrorMirror's photo
Wed 05/13/09 10:35 AM


He Whistles

On the way to his place
With his pole in his hand
Looking all around him
To spend his day as planned

His creel and his tackle
Worms wriggling, spilling
Awaiting their fate
Hook's threaded, unwilling

He whistles a tune
I have heard most my life
His shoulders relaxed
Today no strife.

Many a day
He spent his time
Thinking and planning
Sometimes he'd whine

Why can't I go
Why stay here
The fish are out biting
I feel them so near

Oh, if I had a net
They'd jump right in
Or I could grab them quick
Is a fish lie a sin?

Once in a while now
When he gets that look
You can tell he wants
To bait that hook.

His body's not the
Young he once was
His mind still alive
He doesn't fish becuz.

But, oh, can he whistle
when he walks down that road
you'd never know he was older
It's the way he always blowed.

Raine Les 5/13/2009


flowerforyou

tribefan73's photo
Wed 05/13/09 08:47 PM


He Whistles

On the way to his place
With his pole in his hand
Looking all around him
To spend his day as planned

His creel and his tackle
Worms wriggling, spilling
Awaiting their fate
Hook's threaded, unwilling

He whistles a tune
I have heard most my life
His shoulders relaxed
Today no strife.

Many a day
He spent his time
Thinking and planning
Sometimes he'd whine

Why can't I go
Why stay here
The fish are out biting
I feel them so near

Oh, if I had a net
They'd jump right in
Or I could grab them quick
Is a fish lie a sin?

Once in a while now
When he gets that look
You can tell he wants
To bait that hook.

His body's not the
Young he once was
His mind still alive
He doesn't fish becuz.

But, oh, can he whistle
when he walks down that road
you'd never know he was older
It's the way he always blowed.

Raine Les 5/13/2009




What a beautiful tribute. Many of us fathers, grandfathers, uncles & brothers would like to be remembered this way.

LAMom's photo
Thu 05/14/09 08:34 AM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Sadie,,,,,

Simply Beautiful as is the love that flows from your Soul :heart: