Topic: The Dance
Michael1427's photo
Tue 05/12/09 07:46 PM
The moonlight slips down to caress the dewy grass
Two lovers engage in a kiss, entwined beneath a blanket of stars
The moisture of their embrace fills the air with the fragrance of their love
And the breeze applauds their motions with a soft embrace of its own
Clothing is strewn about as flesh becomes one
The beating of hearts dance to the rhythm of the night sky…

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ArtGurl's photo
Tue 05/12/09 09:43 PM
Welcome ... nice write....I am reminded of one of my favourites ... flowerforyou

I Want to Breathe
by James Laughlin

I want to breathe you in

I'm not talking about
perfume or even the sweet odour

of your skin but of the
air itself I want to share

your air inhaling what you
exhale I'd like to be that

close two of us breathing
each other as one as that.


tribefan73's photo
Wed 05/13/09 08:27 PM

The moonlight slips down to caress the dewy grass
Two lovers engage in a kiss, entwined beneath a blanket of stars
The moisture of their embrace fills the air with the fragrance of their love
And the breeze applauds their motions with a soft embrace of its own
Clothing is strewn about as flesh becomes one
The beating of hearts dance to the rhythm of the night sky…

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Very romantic & earthy.

Michael1427's photo
Fri 05/15/09 07:35 PM
Thank you both ;-)

Meg8771's photo
Fri 05/15/09 08:16 PM
Very nice write, welcome flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Fri 05/15/09 08:17 PM
Edited by AngelLight on Fri 05/15/09 08:29 PM

The moonlight slips down to caress the dewy grass
Two lovers engage in a kiss, entwined beneath a blanket of stars
The moisture of their embrace fills the air with the fragrance of their love
And the breeze applauds their motions with a soft embrace of its own
Clothing is strewn about as flesh becomes one
The beating of hearts dance to the rhythm of the night sky…

Copywrite 2008 Use only with permission



That is very beautiful as a whole Michael....flowerforyou


and....
"The moisture of their embrace fills the air with the fragrance of their love
And the breeze applauds their motions with a soft embrace of its own"

Just lovely.......

Michael1427's photo
Sun 05/17/09 01:39 PM
Thank you ;-)

Ragnorak's photo
Sun 05/17/09 02:31 PM
:smile: a masterpiece