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The moonlight slips down to caress the dewy grass
Two lovers engage in a kiss, entwined beneath a blanket of stars The moisture of their embrace fills the air with the fragrance of their love And the breeze applauds their motions with a soft embrace of its own Clothing is strewn about as flesh becomes one The beating of hearts dance to the rhythm of the night sky… Copywrite 2008 Use only with permission |
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Welcome ... nice write....I am reminded of one of my favourites ...
I Want to Breathe by James Laughlin I want to breathe you in I'm not talking about perfume or even the sweet odour of your skin but of the air itself I want to share your air inhaling what you exhale I'd like to be that close two of us breathing each other as one as that. |
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The moonlight slips down to caress the dewy grass Two lovers engage in a kiss, entwined beneath a blanket of stars The moisture of their embrace fills the air with the fragrance of their love And the breeze applauds their motions with a soft embrace of its own Clothing is strewn about as flesh becomes one The beating of hearts dance to the rhythm of the night sky… Copywrite 2008 Use only with permission Very romantic & earthy. |
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Thank you both ;-)
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Very nice write, welcome
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Edited by
AngelLight
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Fri 05/15/09 08:29 PM
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The moonlight slips down to caress the dewy grass Two lovers engage in a kiss, entwined beneath a blanket of stars The moisture of their embrace fills the air with the fragrance of their love And the breeze applauds their motions with a soft embrace of its own Clothing is strewn about as flesh becomes one The beating of hearts dance to the rhythm of the night sky… Copywrite 2008 Use only with permission That is very beautiful as a whole Michael.... and.... "The moisture of their embrace fills the air with the fragrance of their love And the breeze applauds their motions with a soft embrace of its own" Just lovely....... |
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Thank you ;-)
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a masterpiece
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