Topic: Contemplating
Jimmy59's photo
Wed 05/06/09 01:02 AM
Finding yourself wondering.


Wondering who is there.


Looking at there beauty only to get a stare.


Feeling the wind blowing long into the night.

Will your words bring love to me or just sorrow and
despair.


Feeling this darkness inside me.


Does anybody care.


You said you would stay with me forever and a day.


Will I be able to trust you or any thing you say.


Feeling the hurt upon me pushing on my heart.


Now I have to look for that someone only to make a new start.


Worried about tomorrow and the pain that it will bring.


Waiting for that sunrise hoping to hear our robin sing.


I know your love is real.

You said you would wear my ring.

Are you going to leave me .


Will we ever know the reason why.


Is our love forever this poem is making me cry.

no photo
Wed 05/06/09 01:03 AM
Your writings are just mmmm...mmmm....Way to go Jimmy... flowerforyou

Jimmy59's photo
Wed 05/06/09 01:08 AM

Your writings are just mmmm...mmmm....Way to go Jimmy... flowerforyou
Thank you your thoughts are aways welcome in my life.
smokin

ArtGurl's photo
Wed 05/06/09 01:19 AM
flowerforyou

Jimmy59's photo
Wed 05/06/09 01:39 AM

flowerforyou
Thanks for the flowers.
Roses are red the sky is blue. I except your flowers.
I will put them in water to keep them new.

bastet126's photo
Wed 05/06/09 05:03 AM
i contemplate alot too, thanks for sharing that! flowerforyou

Jimmy59's photo
Wed 05/06/09 10:30 PM

i contemplate alot too, thanks for sharing that! flowerforyou
smokin happy happy flowers

MirrorMirror's photo
Wed 05/06/09 10:57 PM

Finding yourself wondering.


Wondering who is there.


Looking at there beauty only to get a stare.


Feeling the wind blowing long into the night.

Will your words bring love to me or just sorrow and
despair.


Feeling this darkness inside me.


Does anybody care.


You said you would stay with me forever and a day.


Will I be able to trust you or any thing you say.


Feeling the hurt upon me pushing on my heart.


Now I have to look for that someone only to make a new start.


Worried about tomorrow and the pain that it will bring.


Waiting for that sunrise hoping to hear our robin sing.


I know your love is real.

You said you would wear my ring.

Are you going to leave me .


Will we ever know the reason why.


Is our love forever this poem is making me cry.

flowerforyou

nvkikigirl's photo
Wed 05/06/09 11:11 PM
very nice. :thumbsup: waving

AngelLight's photo
Thu 05/07/09 05:52 AM
The poem is makin me cry too Jimmy lol tears


All the same flowers




A_Zo's photo
Thu 05/07/09 11:35 AM
That was so good, I liked it because it seem to be going back and forth with the question: DO You or Don't You... Dang that was good!!:thumbsup: