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A Truly Excellent Write......
 
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*****************Very, very, good.....I love it
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What a lovely poem. The way you use "when I was beautiful" repetively is very effective in drawing one back to the sense of the earlier time and building up a sense of longing for that time.
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Edited by
1PrimeUSDABeefcake
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Sun 05/31/09 04:36 PM
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what a moving and telling write-very nice 
yes great write |
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what a moving and telling write-very nice
I'm glad it spoke to you PKD1220,thanks
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what a moving and telling write-very nice
yes great write thanks PRIME |
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A Truly Excellent Write......
UP2US... thanks for your appreciation 
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*****************Very, very, good.....I love it
Thank you for the love DAYTIME
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What a lovely poem. The way you use "when I was beautiful" repetively is very effective in drawing one back to the sense of the earlier time and building up a sense of longing for that time. CITIGURL thank you much for the analysis and compliment
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This is still a awesome write......
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Yes!!! I too loved the repetition of 'when I was beautiful' ... it felt like a spiraling around and inward as the poem continued. Well done! Thank you for sharing!
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Revisited this poem.... it's just a excellent work.
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Edited by
iam4u
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Sun 06/13/10 05:15 PM
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YOUR beauty rests NOW, in the truly GREATER person you have become.
Through all the youth that passed you by. WE see in you, the essence of pure heart and try. YOU have never been more admired than that in which, you are. A very nice write bro...
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