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Topic: liar
kingme242 Joined Sat 01/31/09 Posts: 73	Tue 04/21/09 07:15 PM
your are a liar venomous words, a thieves tongue stolen my heart, your web is broken black heart black eyes silent words meaningless banter trickery deceivery broken pieces tearless eyes innocence in denial you are a liar

Urg04es Joined Sun 12/02/07 Posts: 1411	Tue 04/21/09 07:18 PM
Your last one was so nice.....now so much anger. Go back to the nice one.

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Tue 04/21/09 07:19 PM
Well written.

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Tue 04/21/09 07:19 PM
Man Kingme242 i hope you feel better now Good write dude

kingme242 Joined Sat 01/31/09 Posts: 73	Tue 04/21/09 07:22 PM
lol, thanks for the compliments. when I write I like put myself in another persons shoes. I find it can be easy to write about my feelings but its a challenge to write about someone elses feelings. Thank again. I just like to write.

writer_gurl Joined Sat 03/01/08 Posts: 7673	Tue 04/21/09 07:29 PM
Wow! So much anger So much depth! So much passion!!

SKPCG Joined Mon 03/03/08 Posts: 14708	Tue 04/21/09 07:46 PM
your are a liar venomous words, a thieves tongue stolen my heart, your web is broken black heart black eyes silent words meaningless banter trickery deceivery broken pieces tearless eyes innocence in denial you are a liar So, you know the guy from Michigan who stomped my heart? Good write. Is "deceivery" a word? Need to hit Encarta.

kingme242 Joined Sat 01/31/09 Posts: 73	Tue 04/21/09 08:07 PM Edited by kingme242 on Tue 04/21/09 08:09 PM
no its not, but I think it should be!!! The heart is just a muscle but the soul is your essence, it is infinite!!!

SKPCG Joined Mon 03/03/08 Posts: 14708	Tue 04/21/09 08:09 PM
no its not, but I think it should be!!! I agree. It fits nicely into your poem!!

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Tue 04/21/09 09:14 PM
your are a liar venomous words, a thieves tongue stolen my heart, your web is broken black heart black eyes silent words meaningless banter trickery deceivery broken pieces tearless eyes innocence in denial you are a liar A strong heart wrenching piece. I know there is much pain behind this, whether yours or not. These were my immediate thoughts . I will post them if you do not mind. Sharris Spider I have posed nothing new I am as I seem a web with a view Black and the venom I am as I've been Didn't you know a spider eats her men. Raine Les 4/21/2009

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 04/22/09 10:32 AM
your are a liar venomous words, a thieves tongue stolen my heart, your web is broken black heart black eyes silent words meaningless banter trickery deceivery broken pieces tearless eyes innocence in denial you are a liar Hugs to you,,,

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