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your are a liar
venomous words, a thieves tongue stolen my heart, your web is broken black heart black eyes silent words meaningless banter trickery deceivery broken pieces tearless eyes innocence in denial you are a liar |
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Your last one was so nice.....now so much anger. Go back to the nice one.
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Well written.
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Man Kingme242 i hope you feel better now
Good write dude 
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lol, thanks for the compliments. when I write I like put myself in another persons shoes. I find it can be easy to write about my feelings but its a challenge to write about someone elses feelings. Thank again. I just like to write.
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Wow!
So much anger 
So much depth! 
So much passion!! 
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your are a liar venomous words, a thieves tongue stolen my heart, your web is broken black heart black eyes silent words meaningless banter trickery deceivery broken pieces tearless eyes innocence in denial you are a liar So, you know the guy from Michigan who stomped my heart? Good write.  Is "deceivery" a word? Need to hit Encarta.
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Edited by
kingme242
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Tue 04/21/09 08:09 PM
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no its not, but I think it should be!!! The heart is just a muscle but the soul is your essence, it is infinite!!!
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no its not, but I think it should be!!! I agree. It fits nicely into your poem!! |
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your are a liar venomous words, a thieves tongue stolen my heart, your web is broken black heart black eyes silent words meaningless banter trickery deceivery broken pieces tearless eyes innocence in denial you are a liar A strong heart wrenching piece. I know there is much pain behind this, whether yours or not. These were my immediate thoughts . I will post them if you do not mind. Sharris Spider I have posed nothing new I am as I seem a web with a view Black and the venom I am as I've been Didn't you know a spider eats her men. Raine Les 4/21/2009 |
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your are a liar venomous words, a thieves tongue stolen my heart, your web is broken black heart black eyes silent words meaningless banter trickery deceivery broken pieces tearless eyes innocence in denial you are a liar Hugs to you,,, |
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