Check it out and let me know what you think.

Thank you for sharing with us your story & letting us get to know you.

Dude! That's a helluva profile. It's like an emotional roller coaster

I hate to say it since it looks like you put some time into it, but if you're looking here for women, past experiences of making love to other women is not a really good idea. Maybe a few hints about how romantic you can be, but not so many details.

I dunno, I might be wrong, but think I will make a thread about it in the forums to find out, considering it is such a romantic story. I give you props on putting that evening together.

My condolences on losing your brother. That was a hell of a story too. I wonder how you didn't go kill the guy.

Um, next...you have a great selection of pictures and you're a good looking guy. I mean that in a totally non-gay way. But I think the last default pic you had was much better. Granted you got some muscles and stuff, it's not nessecarily the first thing the ladies wanna see.

Other than that uh...very well written. Shows a lot about you and that you're a decent guy.

So good job. I wish you luck in finding what you seek.

For real, man that isn't you, first picture has GOT to go. We want to see YOU, not be teased by some macho man who isn't you, your alter ego in action? Women don't like cocky or egotistical. I would take out all the pictures except for the smiling ones and the ones with the horses. Your writings are good, but WAAAAAY too long. No one will want to read all that, unless they don't have a life. You don't want to hook up with one of these do you?

The first photo is fake. Delete it.

It is WAY too long and by all sounds, you are still not over your exes or you think by talking about them you will attract a new woman you can then later tell a detailed and intimate story about on the Internet?


I'm sorry, but it needs some serious, serious editing. Mostly, deletion...IMO.

I agree the fake pic has to go or definately do not put it as your main pic. No woman wants to hear about an ex and "Till this day I think about it and "I remember it like it was yesterday. One day I hope to find someone that I can share a time like that with again."

Honestly WAY TOO LOng...I didn't even read the whole thing. My ADD kicked in LMAO

Still Luv Ya Jerry

Sorry about your bro. Your profile is fine and you're a babe.