Topic: On my Own
Meg8771's photo
Sat 04/11/09 08:04 PM
I am caught somewhere in the middle
between my old life and my new
She is the only thing that connects us
this small piece of me and you

You walked away, you fell in love
you left us far behind
I try to keep my temper in check
and for her sake to you be kind

We are nothing more than trophies
that you can sit upon some shelf
more concerned with what others think
about your looks, your talents and wealth

Walk away, do not look back
I can do it on my own
Raise this gift from God above
until she is full grown

One day you will finally turn around
and then she will be gone
Nothing from you will she want
for it was you alone that broke that bond

And as for me, I will too be gone
living my life on my own
You gave it all away when you left
Your wife, your child and your home.








s1owhand's photo
Sat 04/11/09 08:07 PM
flowerforyou

powerful and real

flowerforyou

elwoodsully's photo
Sat 04/11/09 08:08 PM
:cry: flowerforyou

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Sat 04/11/09 08:14 PM
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Dro_In_Indio's photo
Sat 04/11/09 10:03 PM
Very nice. Sad. sad flowerforyou sad

no photo
Sat 04/11/09 10:08 PM
You have a lovely way in writing
If you are not already a member
have a look at the site...

http://allpoetry.com

I feel your work will find many readers,
there too one can involve self in contest,
to win points/trophies, or hold contests...

Meg8771's photo
Sat 04/11/09 10:12 PM

You have a lovely way in writing
If you are not already a member
have a look at the site...

http://allpoetry.com

I feel your work will find many readers,
there too one can involve self in contest,
to win points/trophies, or hold contests...




Thank you. I will check it out. And also, I appreciate your insight.

Meg8771's photo
Sat 04/11/09 10:15 PM
And S!ow, Sully, 2kidsMom and Dro, thank you very much for letting me vent. flowerforyou

nvkikigirl's photo
Sun 04/12/09 12:58 AM
very nice!!!:thumbsup:

d4tc's photo
Sun 04/12/09 01:36 AM
Excellent! flowerforyou flowerforyou
Nice opening and close.

Puffins1958's photo
Sun 04/12/09 06:48 AM
Very touching


flowers

Meg8771's photo
Sun 04/12/09 07:32 AM
Thank you, all blushing

southerngirl54's photo
Sun 04/12/09 07:29 PM
Great write.

MzEm's photo
Mon 04/13/09 09:29 AM
Wow so deep...and so full of truth.

Meg8771's photo
Mon 04/13/09 09:56 AM

You have a lovely way in writing
If you are not already a member
have a look at the site...

http://allpoetry.com

I feel your work will find many readers,
there too one can involve self in contest,
to win points/trophies, or hold contests...



Thank you for the advice - it is a lovely site and I opened an account today. Maybe I can post everything together. It will be nice to read everything under one "roof" so to speak and reflect on my reflections.

Cutiepieforyou's photo
Mon 04/13/09 10:42 AM
You write poetry really well. The poem itself is sad and flowers happens to so many of us.

Meg8771's photo
Mon 04/13/09 11:23 AM

You write poetry really well. The poem itself is sad and flowers happens to so many of us.



Thank you. I agree - I was pretty sad when I wrote it. But it worked, I felt much better after getting it down on paper.

no photo
Mon 04/13/09 03:38 PM
full of emotion and wonderfully writtenflowerforyou flowerforyou