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in shrouds I keep the vice of me
held to lust bond to plea whose fumes seep beneath my door veiled by remorse marked by four shackled beyond Izanagi's sight vindicated to eternal blight i don't really know how to write a poem so any advice or corrections would be awesome |
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hmm.. i must think on this.
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"i don't really know how to write a poem so any advice or corrections would be awesome "
There's nothing to know or think about....just let a write flow from your Soul...just start with a nuance and go with it 
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if your writing gives you a satisfied feeling, that is a measure of success for me
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